Dec. 19, 2020
My teacher wants me to record myself speaking and gave me a list of prompts. My second one is to talk about a childhood memory. This is what I intend to say, please correct me! Thank you!
我今天要谈论的童年记忆是我第一次吃披萨。 我直到五岁才吃披萨! 我不知道为什么,但是我以为即使我从未吃过披萨,披萨也很不好吃。 我记得我说过难闻的气味。 有一天,我忘记了我在家里的饭盒。 我不得不吃我学校做的午餐。 那天他们做了比萨。 我很害怕,因为我不喜欢披萨,但我不想挨饿! 所以我咬了一口,以为我会讨厌它,但是我喜欢它! 我记得那之后我感到多么高兴。 我都吃了 放学后,我回家告诉我妈妈。 她很高兴! 那天晚上我们也吃了比萨作为晚餐。
The childhood memory I will talk about today is the first time I ate pizza. I didn't eat pizza until I was five years old! I don't know why but I thought that pizza was bad tasting even though I had never had pizza. I remember I said it smelled bad. One day I had forgotten my lunchbox at home. I had to eat the lunch my school made. That day they made pizza. I was so scared because I didn't like pizza, but I didn't want to starve! So I took a bite and thought I would hate it, but I loved it! I remember how happy I felt after that. I ate all of it. After school I went home and told my mom about it. She was very happy! We had pizza for dinner that night too.
童年的记忆
我今天要谈论的童年记忆是我第一次吃披萨。
我直到五岁才吃披萨!
我不知道为什么,但是我以为即使虽然我从未吃过披萨,但是我却以为披萨也很不好吃。
虽然 = even though
即使 = even if
我记得我说过难闻的气味。它很难闻。
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我记得我说过它很难闻。
I remember I said it smelled bad.
我记得我说过它有一种难闻的气味。
I remember I said that it has an unpleasant smell.
有一天,我忘记了我在家里的饭盒把它留在家里。
我忘记了我的饭盒把它留在家里。
I had forgotten my lunchbox and left it at home.
我忘记了我在家里的饭盒。
I had forgotten my lunchbox which is at home.
我不得不吃我学校做的午餐。
那天他们做了比萨。
我很害怕,因为我不喜欢披萨,但我不想挨饿!
所以我咬了一口,以为我会讨厌它,但是我却很喜欢它!
The function of 却 here is like "yet".
我记得那次之后我感到多么高兴。
我都吃了 。放学后,我回家告诉我妈妈。
她很高兴!
那天晚上我们也吃了比萨作为晚餐。
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My teacher wants me to record myself speaking and gave me a list of prompts. |
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My second one is to talk about a childhood memory. |
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This is what I intend to say, please correct me! |
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Thank you! |
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我今天要谈论的童年记忆是我第一次吃披萨。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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我直到五岁才吃披萨! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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我不知道为什么,但是我以为即使我从未吃过披萨,披萨也很不好吃。 我不知道为什么, 虽然 = even though 即使 = even if |
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我记得我说过难闻的气味。 我记得我说过 我记得我说过它很难闻。 I remember I said it smelled bad. 我记得我说过它有一种难闻的气味。 I remember I said that it has an unpleasant smell. |
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有一天,我忘记了我在家里的饭盒。 有一天,我忘记了我 我忘记了我的饭盒把它留在家里。 I had forgotten my lunchbox and left it at home. 我忘记了我在家里的饭盒。 I had forgotten my lunchbox which is at home. |
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我不得不吃我学校做的午餐。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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那天他们做了比萨。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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我很害怕,因为我不喜欢披萨,但我不想挨饿! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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所以我咬了一口,以为我会讨厌它,但是我喜欢它! 所以我咬了一口,以为我会讨厌它,但是我却很喜欢它! The function of 却 here is like "yet". |
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我记得那之后我感到多么高兴。 我记得那次之后我感到多么高兴。 |
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我都吃了 放学后,我回家告诉我妈妈。 我都吃了 |
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她很高兴! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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那天晚上我们也吃了比萨作为晚餐。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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