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Tay

Dec. 19, 2020

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童年的记忆

My teacher wants me to record myself speaking and gave me a list of prompts. My second one is to talk about a childhood memory. This is what I intend to say, please correct me! Thank you!

我今天要谈论的童年记忆是我第一次吃披萨。 我直到五岁才吃披萨! 我不知道为什么,但是我以为即使我从未吃过披萨,披萨也很不好吃。 我记得我说过难闻的气味。 有一天,我忘记了我在家里的饭盒。 我不得不吃我学校做的午餐。 那天他们做了比萨。 我很害怕,因为我不喜欢披萨,但我不想挨饿! 所以我咬了一口,以为我会讨厌它,但是我喜欢它! 我记得那之后我感到多么高兴。 我都吃了 放学后,我回家告诉我妈妈。 她很高兴! 那天晚上我们也吃了比萨作为晚餐。


The childhood memory I will talk about today is the first time I ate pizza. I didn't eat pizza until I was five years old! I don't know why but I thought that pizza was bad tasting even though I had never had pizza. I remember I said it smelled bad. One day I had forgotten my lunchbox at home. I had to eat the lunch my school made. That day they made pizza. I was so scared because I didn't like pizza, but I didn't want to starve! So I took a bite and thought I would hate it, but I loved it! I remember how happy I felt after that. I ate all of it. After school I went home and told my mom about it. She was very happy! We had pizza for dinner that night too.

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童年的记忆

我今天要谈论的童年记忆是我第一次吃披萨。

我直到五岁才吃披萨!

我不知道为什么,但是我以为即使虽然我从未吃过披萨,但是我却以为披萨很不好吃。

虽然 = even though
即使 = even if

我记得我说过难闻的气味。它很难闻。 ¶

我记得我说过它很难闻。
I remember I said it smelled bad.

我记得我说过它有一种难闻的气味。
I remember I said that it has an unpleasant smell.

有一天,我忘记了我在家里的饭盒把它留在家里

我忘记了我的饭盒把它留在家里。
I had forgotten my lunchbox and left it at home.

我忘记了我在家里的饭盒。
I had forgotten my lunchbox which is at home.

我不得不吃我学校做的午餐。

那天他们做了比萨。

我很害怕,因为我不喜欢披萨,但我不想挨饿!

所以我咬了一口,以为我会讨厌它,但是我却很喜欢它!

The function of 却 here is like "yet".

我记得那之后我感到多么高兴。

我都吃了 放学后,我回家告诉我妈妈。

她很高兴!

那天晚上我们也吃了比萨作为晚餐。

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Cacahuete247

Dec. 20, 2020

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What a great pizza discovery!

童年的记忆


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My teacher wants me to record myself speaking and gave me a list of prompts.


My second one is to talk about a childhood memory.


This is what I intend to say, please correct me!


Thank you!


我今天要谈论的童年记忆是我第一次吃披萨。


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我直到五岁才吃披萨!


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我不知道为什么,但是我以为即使我从未吃过披萨,披萨也很不好吃。


我不知道为什么,但是我以为即使虽然我从未吃过披萨,但是我却以为披萨很不好吃。

虽然 = even though 即使 = even if

我记得我说过难闻的气味。


我记得我说过难闻的气味。它很难闻。 ¶

我记得我说过它很难闻。 I remember I said it smelled bad. 我记得我说过它有一种难闻的气味。 I remember I said that it has an unpleasant smell.

有一天,我忘记了我在家里的饭盒。


有一天,我忘记了我在家里的饭盒把它留在家里

我忘记了我的饭盒把它留在家里。 I had forgotten my lunchbox and left it at home. 我忘记了我在家里的饭盒。 I had forgotten my lunchbox which is at home.

我不得不吃我学校做的午餐。


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那天他们做了比萨。


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我很害怕,因为我不喜欢披萨,但我不想挨饿!


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所以我咬了一口,以为我会讨厌它,但是我喜欢它!


所以我咬了一口,以为我会讨厌它,但是我却很喜欢它!

The function of 却 here is like "yet".

我记得那之后我感到多么高兴。


我记得那之后我感到多么高兴。

我都吃了 放学后,我回家告诉我妈妈。


我都吃了 放学后,我回家告诉我妈妈。

她很高兴!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

那天晚上我们也吃了比萨作为晚餐。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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