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Dec. 19, 2020

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童年的爱好

My teacher wants me to record myself speaking and gave me a list of prompts. My third one is to talk about a hobby I had as a child. This is what I intend to say, please correct me! Thank you!

今天,我将谈论我小时候的爱好。 我小时候喜欢踢足球。 我并加入了一支足球队。 我踢了八年足球。 当我十四岁的时候,我踢足球时受伤了。 我弄伤了臀部的肌肉。 在那之后我不得不停止踢足球。 我很悲了。 一年后,我试图再次在一个队中比赛,但我又一次受伤了。 所以现在我只是偶尔玩一次。 我现在喜欢在电视上看足球。


Today, I will talk about my childhood hobbies. When I was young, I liked playing football. I also joined a football team. I have played football for eight years. When I was fourteen, I was injured while playing football. I hurt my hip muscles. After that I had to stop playing football. I am very sad. A year later, I tried to play in a team again, but I was injured again. So now I only play it once in a while. I like watching football on TV now.

Corrections

加入了一支足球队。

我很悲

所以现在我只是偶尔玩一次

我现在喜欢在电视上看足球。

加入了一支足球队。

弄伤了臀部的肌肉。

很悲了。感到十分悲伤

一年后,我试图再次在一个队中参加一次比赛,但我又一次受伤了。

所以现在我只是偶尔玩一次。

我现在喜欢在电视上但是,我现在以及喜欢看足球频道

童年的爱好

My teacher wants me to record myself speaking and gave me a list of prompts.

My third one is to talk about a hobby I had as a child.

This is what I intend to say, please correct me!

Thank you!

今天,我将谈论我小时候的爱好。

我小时候喜欢踢足球。

我并而且加入了一支足球队。

我踢了八年足球。

我十四岁的时候,我踢足球时受伤了。

我弄伤了臀部的肌肉。

在那之后我不得不停止踢足球。

我很悲了伤心

一年后,我试图再次在一个队中比赛,但我又一次受伤了。

所以现在我只是偶尔玩一次。

我现在喜欢在电视上看足球(比赛)

在那之后我不得不停止踢足球。


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我很悲了。


我很悲了伤心

很悲了。感到十分悲伤

我很悲

童年的爱好


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My teacher wants me to record myself speaking and gave me a list of prompts.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My third one is to talk about a hobby I had as a child.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This is what I intend to say, please correct me!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thank you!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

今天,我将谈论我小时候的爱好。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我小时候喜欢踢足球。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我并加入了一支足球队。


我并而且加入了一支足球队。

加入了一支足球队。

加入了一支足球队。

我踢了八年足球。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

当我十四岁的时候,我踢足球时受伤了。


我十四岁的时候,我踢足球时受伤了。

我弄伤了臀部的肌肉。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

弄伤了臀部的肌肉。

一年后,我试图再次在一个队中比赛,但我又一次受伤了。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

一年后,我试图再次在一个队中参加一次比赛,但我又一次受伤了。

所以现在我只是偶尔玩一次。


所以现在我只是偶尔玩一次。

所以现在我只是偶尔玩一次。

所以现在我只是偶尔玩一次

我现在喜欢在电视上看足球。


我现在喜欢在电视上看足球(比赛)

我现在喜欢在电视上但是,我现在以及喜欢看足球频道

我现在喜欢在电视上看足球。

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