Feb. 29, 2024
数学课上约书亚坐在我旁边. 他很聪明。他数学考试总是得A。如果我得到 C 或者 D,我就很幸运了。我希望我能像他一样. 为什么我不能理解数学他一样?他不但聪明,而且很帅和运动。在夏天,他踢足球和游泳。从秋天到冬天,他为我们学校打篮球。女孩都喜欢他。她们说他善良,聪明,和好笑。人们还认为他很酷,因为他是篮球最好的球员。老师们也喜欢他。他总是参加课堂和帮助老师学校安排活动。
我想我可能会嫉妒。我不聪明,不有趣,也不酷或运动。我喜欢看书,画画喝完单子游戏。他有很多朋友,并且已经决定了他想要什么大学。我听别人说,他要么想成为一个职业篮球运动员,或者想成为一个工程师。我的朋友说:“你应该去和约书亚谈谈。你们可能会成为朋友。” 也许他们是对的。但如果我和他说话我也会变得受欢迎吗?
Joshua sits beside me in math class. He is so smart. He always gets As on the Math test. I am not good at Math. I am lucky if I get a C or D. I wish I was like him. Why can’t I understand math like him? Not only is he smart, but he is also handsome and athletic. He plays soccer and swims in the summer. In the fall to winter, he plays basketball for our school. All the girls like him. They say he is kind, smart, and funny. People also think he is cool since he is the best player on the basketball team. The teachers like him as well. He always participates in class and helps the teachers set up events for school.
I think I might be jealous. I am not smart, I am not funny, nor I am cool or athletic. I like to read, draw, and play video games. He has many friends and has already decided what college he wants. I heard from others, he wants to be either a professional basketball player or become an engineer. One of my friends said “You should go talk to Joshua. You guys might become friends.” Maybe they are right. But if I talk to him will I become popular too?
数学课上约书亚坐在我旁边. ,他很聪明。
我希望我能像他一样. 。为什么我不能像他一样理解数学他一样呢?
他不但聪明,而且很帅和,也热爱运动。
从秋天到冬天,他为代表我们学校打篮球比赛。
He represents our school in playing basketball games.
女孩们都喜欢他。
她们说他善良,、聪明,和好笑和幽默。
人们还认为大家还觉得他很酷,因为他是篮球最好的球员。
他总是参加课堂和帮助老师学校安排按时来上课,并帮助老师安排学校活动。
He always comes to class on time and helps the teacher arrange school activities.
我不聪明,、不有趣,、也不酷或,还不热爱运动。
我喜欢看书,、画画喝完单和玩电子游戏。
他有很多朋友,并且已经决定了他想要上什么大学。
我听别人说,他想要么想成为一个职业篮球运动员,或者想要么成为一个工程师。
要么……要么……
我的朋友说:“你应该去和约书亚谈谈。
你们可能会成为朋友。
” 也许他们是对的。
但如果我和他说话谈过后,我也会变得受欢迎吗?
But if I talk to him, will I also become popular?
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如果我得到 C 或者 D,我就很幸运了。 |
我希望我能像他一样. 为什么我不能理解数学他一样? 我希望我能像他一样 |
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数学课上约书亚坐在我旁边. 他很聪明。 数学课上约书亚坐在我旁边 |
他数学考试总是得A。 |
我想我可能会嫉妒。 |
我不聪明,不有趣,也不酷或运动。 我不聪明 |
他不但聪明,而且很帅和运动。 他不但聪明,而且很帅 |
在夏天,他踢足球和游泳。 |
从秋天到冬天,他为我们学校打篮球。 从秋天到冬天,他 He represents our school in playing basketball games. |
女孩都喜欢他。 女孩们都喜欢他。 |
她们说他善良,聪明,和好笑。 她们说他善良 |
人们还认为他很酷,因为他是篮球最好的球员。
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老师们也喜欢他。 |
他总是参加课堂和帮助老师学校安排活动。 他总是 He always comes to class on time and helps the teacher arrange school activities. |
我喜欢看书,画画喝完单子游戏。 我喜欢看书 |
他有很多朋友,并且已经决定了他想要什么大学。 他有很多朋友,并且已经决定了他想要上什么大学。 |
我听别人说,他要么想成为一个职业篮球运动员,或者想成为一个工程师。 我听别人说,他想要么 要么……要么…… |
我的朋友说:“你应该去和约书亚谈谈。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
你们可能会成为朋友。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
” 也许他们是对的。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
但如果我和他说话我也会变得受欢迎吗? 但如果我和他 But if I talk to him, will I also become popular? |
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