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Toluwani

Oct. 2, 2025

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眼神

今天我看到了一个小孩子吃面包。他不想吃那个面包,所以他想把面包变成球。面包一到了地上,他爸爸给他一种眼神,他不敢好好踢那个面包。一看那个眼神,记得我小时候收到过这种眼神。你也收到过吗?


Today I saw a little child eating bread. He didn’t want to eat it, so he tried to turn the bread into a ball. When the bread fell to the ground, his father gave him a look, and he didn’t dare to really kick the bread. Seeing that look reminded me of the times when I got that same look as a child. Have you ever gotten that look, too?

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Kindred Spirit

眼神

今天我看到一个小孩子吃面包。

他不想吃那个面包,所以他想把面包成球(踢)

面包一到地上,他爸爸给他一眼神,于是他不敢好好真的踢那个面包。

那个眼神,记得让我想起我小时候收到过这种眼神。

你也收到过吗?

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Toluwani

Oct. 20, 2025

62

谢谢您。我都忘了我写过这篇文章😅。

眼神


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今天我看到了一个小孩子吃面包。


今天我看到一个小孩子吃面包。

他不想吃那个面包,所以他想把面包变成球。


他不想吃那个面包,所以他想把面包成球(踢)

面包一到了地上,他爸爸给他一种眼神,他不敢好好踢那个面包。


面包一到地上,他爸爸给他一眼神,于是他不敢好好真的踢那个面包。

一看那个眼神,记得我小时候收到过这种眼神。


那个眼神,记得让我想起我小时候收到过这种眼神。

你也收到过吗?


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