May 3, 2022
生日晚会
王大伟，你好！星期五是爱琳娜的生日。你能不能去？
爱琳娜是我的妹妹！我去。 今天我去买她的生日蛋糕。商店在哪儿？
商店是图书馆后边。
是啊！我现在去商店。
好。我和你一起去商店。
为什么？
因为我没有礼物。
啊！很坏！
对不起。我每天很忙。
我妹妹没有电脑。
这是一个很好的礼物。她喜欢学习。我买也书。
爱琳娜的生日晚会几点？
爱琳娜的生日晚会八点。
谢谢。我和罗莎去爱琳娜的生日晚会. 她是我的女朋友。
好。我这个星期六见她。 再见！
This is a conversation between two people.
生日晚会
or 生日派对
王大伟，你好！
星期五是爱琳娜的生日。
你能不能去？
爱琳娜是我的妹妹！
我去。
今天我去买她的生日蛋糕。
商店在哪儿？
商店是在图书馆后边。
是啊好的！
我现在去商店。
好。
我和你一起去商店。
为什么？
因为我没有礼物。
啊！
很坏！
The sentence itself is grammatically correct. However, it is too much to describe someone who forgot to prepare a birthday gift and was on his/her way to buy one as 好坏. lol
对不起。
我每天都很忙。
我妹妹没有电脑。
这将是一个很好的礼物。
她喜欢学习。
我买也想买书。
爱琳娜的生日晚会几点派对几点开始？
爱琳娜的生日晚会八点开始。
谢谢。
我会和罗莎一起去爱琳娜的生日晚会.
an alternative
她是我的女朋友。
好。
我这个星期六会去见她。
an alternative
再见！
Feedback
Nice writing!
May 4, 2022
谢谢！♥
生日晚会
王大伟，你好！
星期五是爱琳娜的生日。
你能不能去？
爱琳娜是我的妹妹！
我去。
今天我去买她的生日蛋糕。
商店在哪儿？
商店是在图书馆后边。
是啊！
我现在去商店。
好。
我和你一起去商店。
为什么？
因为我没有礼物。
啊！
很坏你很差劲！
对不起。
我每天都很忙。
我妹妹没有电脑。
这会是一个份很好的礼物。
她喜欢学习。
我买也书。
爱琳娜的生日晚会几点开始？
爱琳娜的生日晚会在八点开始。
谢谢。
我和罗莎去爱琳娜的生日晚会.
她是我的女朋友。
好。
我这个星期六见她。
再见！
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