June 6, 2024
爸爸的菜
开始漫画里有一个男孩看着爸爸做饭。
他们坐下来吃饭。
孩子拒绝吃他的食物。这让爸爸很生气。
孩子看了一会食物，然后把它倒进了狗的碗里。
这让爸爸更多生气。
但是狗也不喜欢爸爸的菜。狗踢翻了碗。男孩和他的爸爸非常惊讶。
之后爸爸也把他的食物扔掉了。
他们三个人出去饭店吃饭。他们晚餐吃冰淇淋，非常开心。
The (Japanese) comic starts with a boy watching his dad cook food.
They sit down to eat.
The child refuses to eat his food. This makes the dad angry.
The child looks at his food for a while, then pours it into the dog's bowl.
This makes the dad even angrier.
But the dog doesn't like the dad's food either. The dog kicks over the bowl. The boy and his dad are very surprised.
After that the dad also throws out his food.
All three of them go out to dinner at a restaurant. They eat ice-cream for dinner and are very happy.
爸爸的菜
开始漫画里漫画的开头有一个男孩看着他爸爸做饭。
¶然后他们坐下来准备吃饭。
¶但孩子拒绝吃他的食物。，
这让爸爸很生气。
¶孩子看了一会食物，然后接着把它倒进了狗的碗里。
¶这让爸爸更多生气了。
但是狗也不喜欢爸爸的菜。
狗踢翻了碗。
男孩和他的爸爸非常惊讶。
¶之后爸爸也把他的食物也扔掉了。
¶他们三个人出一起去饭店吃饭。
他们晚餐吃了冰淇淋，非常开心。
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不错哦，都是些小问题。
爸爸的菜
一开始，漫画里有一个男孩看着爸爸做饭。
他们坐下来吃饭。
孩子拒绝吃他的食物。
这让爸爸很生气。
¶孩子看了一会食物，然后把它倒进了(了)狗的碗里。
¶这让爸爸更多生气。
但是狗也不喜欢爸爸的菜。
狗踢翻了碗。
男孩和他的爸爸非常惊讶。
之后爸爸也把他的食物扔掉了。
他们三个人出去饭店吃饭。
他们晚餐吃(了)冰淇淋，非常开心。
爸爸做的菜
开始漫画里有一个男孩看着他爸爸做饭。
¶然而，他们坐下来吃饭。
¶孩子不吃爸爸做的食物。
孩子拒绝吃他
这让爸爸很生气。
¶孩子看了一会食物，然后把它倒进了狗的碗里。
我是通常说狗盆。
¶这让爸爸更多生气。
¶但是狗也不喜欢爸爸做的菜。
狗踢翻了碗。
男孩和他的爸爸非常惊讶。
¶之后爸爸也把他做的食物扔掉了。
¶他们三个人出去去饭店吃饭。
他们晚餐吃（了）冰淇淋，非常开心。
爸爸做的菜
如果你說"爸爸的菜"，可能有人會以為是"my father's cup of tea."
开始漫画里漫画一开始有一个男孩看着爸爸做饭。
他们坐下来吃饭。
¶但是孩子拒绝吃他的食物爸爸做的菜。
这让爸爸很生气。
¶孩子看了一会儿食物，然后把它倒进了狗的碗里。
¶这让爸爸更多生气。
¶但是结果狗也不喜欢爸爸做的菜。
狗踢翻了碗。
男孩和他的爸爸都非常惊讶。
¶之后爸爸也把他碗里的食物扔掉了。
¶然后他们三个人出去饭店吃饭。
狗不是人所以不能说“三个人”
他们晚餐吃冰淇淋，吃得非常开心。
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很有趣的故事!
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开始漫画里有一个男孩看着爸爸做饭。
一开始，漫画里有一个男孩看着爸爸做饭。
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他们坐下来吃饭。 This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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孩子拒绝吃他的食物。
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但是狗也不喜欢爸爸的菜。
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之后爸爸也把他的食物扔掉了。
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他们三个人出去饭店吃饭。
狗不是人所以不能说“三个人”
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孩子看了一会食物，然后把它倒进了狗的碗里。
我是通常说狗盆。
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这让爸爸更多生气。
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