Dec. 9, 2024
煤气灶
今天下午（四点多）才回家，我那时不想做饭。后来在晚上我去做饭，做饭的时候煤气灶就没了。幸亏饭已经做好，但是我倒的水太多了。
I didn't get home until 4 pm this evening, and I didn't feel like cooking. Later in the evening, I went to cook, and the gas stove was exhausted when I was cooking. Fortunately, the meal was already ready, but I poured too much water.
煤气灶
今天下午（四点多）才回家，我那时不想做饭。
如果你在一个句子中加括号作为附加内容，那么整个句子去掉括号内容之后应该也是完整的。
后来在晚上我去做饭的时候，做饭的时候煤气灶就没气了。
I didn't get home until 4 pm this evening, and I didn't feel like cooking. Later in the evening, I went to cook, and the gas stove was exhausted when I was cooking. Fortunately, the meal was already ready, but I poured too much water.
幸亏饭已经做好了，但是我倒的水太多了点。
Dec. 16, 2024
哦，谢谢您。
我今天下午（四点多）才回家，我那时候不想做饭。
后来在晚上我去做饭了，做饭的时候发现煤气灶就没气了。
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写的时候可以把主语“我”之类的放在第一个哦，这样的话别人会更清楚你在叙述什么。整体很棒，就是有一点小小的地方不是很自然。
Dec. 16, 2024
哦，谢谢您。
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今天下午（四点多）才回家，我那时不想做饭。 我今天下午 今天下午 如果你在一个句子中加括号作为附加内容，那么整个句子去掉括号内容之后应该也是完整的。 |
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后来在晚上我去做饭，做饭的时候煤气灶就没了。 后来 后来 I didn't get home until 4 pm this evening, and I didn't feel like cooking. Later in the evening, I went to cook, and the gas stove was exhausted when I was cooking. Fortunately, the meal was already ready, but I poured too much water. 后来 两个做饭重复了 |
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幸亏饭已经做好，但是我倒的水太多了。 幸亏饭已经做好了，但是我倒的水太多了点。 |
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