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bea

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蒂姆20岁。他住法兰克福。他的祖母住在慕尼黑。去🚆火车站。蒂姆想去拜访她。于是他乘火车去了慕尼黑。他很高兴。

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蒂姆20岁。

他住法兰克福。

他的祖母住在慕尼黑。

所以他去了🚆火车站。

It would be better to change the order of this sentence and the following sentence.

蒂姆想去拜访她。

于是他乘火车去了慕尼黑。

他很高兴。

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bea

May 30, 2025

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谢谢你!🙂

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stillfat1999

June 2, 2025

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加油!

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蒂姆20岁。


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他住法兰克福。


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他的祖母住在慕尼黑。


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去🚆火车站。


所以他去了🚆火车站。

It would be better to change the order of this sentence and the following sentence.

蒂姆想去拜访她。


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于是他乘火车去了慕尼黑。


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他很高兴。


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