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Toluwani

Sept. 28, 2024

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演示

几天我发了一条文章说一位老师给我们作业。作业呢我们会做演示,做演示时不可以带了一片纸。一看这条短信,我的肚子就开始疼。如果我特别紧张我的肚子会疼。其实这不是我第一次做演示,但我还是紧张。我知道他们在做这些为我们的好但是这条路不好走啊😭。做演示后,我会写着我怎么做演示。


A few days ago I posted a write-up about a lecturer giving us homework. As for the homework, we will give a presentation, and you are not allowed to bring a piece of paper with you when giving the presentation. As soon as I read this text message, my stomach started to hurt. If I'm very nervous, my stomach hurts a lot. Actually, this is not my first time giving a presentation, but I am still nervous. I know they are doing this for our good, but this road is rough😭. After I've given the presentation, I will write about it.

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几天我发了一条文章说一位老师留了我们作业。

作业的内容要求我们做演示,而且演示时不可以带了一片纸能带任何纸类

一看这条短信,我的肚子就开始疼。

如果每当我特别紧张我的肚子会疼。

其实这不是我第一次做演示,但我还是紧张。

我知道他们做这些为我们的好是为了我们好,但是这条路不好走啊😭。

演示后,我会写着我写我是怎么做演示

演示

几天我发了一文章说位老师给我们留了份家庭作业。

A few days ago I posted a write-up about a lecturer giving us homework. As for the homework, we will give a presentation, and you are not allowed to bring a piece of paper with you when giving the presentation. As soon as I read this text message, my stomach started to hurt. If I'm very nervous, my stomach hurts a lot. Actually, this is not my first time giving a presentation, but I am still nervous. I know they are doing this for our good, but this road is rough😭. After I've given the presentation, I will write about it.

这个作业呢我们做演示,而且演示时一张纸都不可以带了一片纸

一看这条短信,我的肚子就开始疼。

如果我特别紧张我的肚子会疼。

其实这不是我第一次做演示,但我还是紧张。

我知道他们做这些为我们的好但是这条路不好走啊😭。

等做完演示后,我会写着我写我是怎么做演示。

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Tammy

Sept. 29, 2024

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哎呀,抱歉,我忘了删掉复制过来参考用的原文了。

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Toluwani

Sept. 29, 2024

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感谢您❤️。
我也有一次做错误🙂。

Do you mean presentation? If so, I think it is better to say 演讲
演示 means demonstration, like in a science lesson, the teacher demonstrates how to do the experiment, but in my daily life, I seldom use this word.

几天我发了一文章说一位老师给我们作业。

作业呢我们会做演示,做演示演讲,而且演讲时不可以带了一片纸。

演讲 itself is a verb so no need to add another verb in front of it.
adding 而且 to make the sentence more connected.
you dont have to say one piece of paper, just paper would be fine, coz if you say one piece of paper, then can the student bring two pieces of paper? haha
btw, the preposition for paper is 一张纸*

这条短信,我的肚子就开始疼。

如果我特别紧张, 我的肚子会疼。

you can also say: 當我特别紧张时候, 我的肚子会疼。

其实这不是我第一次做演示演讲,但我还是紧张。

我知道他们在做这些为我们, 但是这条路不好走啊😭。

you can also say 我知道这是为我们好,但这很难 or 这并不容易。

做演示演讲完后,我会写着我怎么做演示演讲

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Toluwani

Sept. 29, 2024

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I meant presentation.
感谢您❤️

演示


Do you mean presentation? If so, I think it is better to say 演讲 演示 means demonstration, like in a science lesson, the teacher demonstrates how to do the experiment, but in my daily life, I seldom use this word.

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几天我发了一条文章说一位老师给我们作业。


几天我发了一文章说一位老师给我们作业。

几天我发了一文章说位老师给我们留了份家庭作业。

A few days ago I posted a write-up about a lecturer giving us homework. As for the homework, we will give a presentation, and you are not allowed to bring a piece of paper with you when giving the presentation. As soon as I read this text message, my stomach started to hurt. If I'm very nervous, my stomach hurts a lot. Actually, this is not my first time giving a presentation, but I am still nervous. I know they are doing this for our good, but this road is rough😭. After I've given the presentation, I will write about it.

几天我发了一条文章说一位老师留了我们作业。

作业呢我们会做演示,做演示时不可以带了一片纸。


作业呢我们会做演示,做演示演讲,而且演讲时不可以带了一片纸。

演讲 itself is a verb so no need to add another verb in front of it. adding 而且 to make the sentence more connected. you dont have to say one piece of paper, just paper would be fine, coz if you say one piece of paper, then can the student bring two pieces of paper? haha btw, the preposition for paper is 一张纸*

这个作业呢我们做演示,而且演示时一张纸都不可以带了一片纸

作业的内容要求我们做演示,而且演示时不可以带了一片纸能带任何纸类

一看这条短信,我的肚子就开始疼。


这条短信,我的肚子就开始疼。

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

一看这条短信,我的肚子就开始疼。

如果我特别紧张我的肚子会疼。


如果我特别紧张, 我的肚子会疼。

you can also say: 當我特别紧张时候, 我的肚子会疼。

如果我特别紧张我的肚子会疼。

如果每当我特别紧张我的肚子会疼。

其实这不是我第一次做演示,但我还是紧张。


其实这不是我第一次做演示演讲,但我还是紧张。

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

其实这不是我第一次做演示,但我还是紧张。

我知道他们在做这些为我们的好但是这条路不好走啊😭。


我知道他们在做这些为我们, 但是这条路不好走啊😭。

you can also say 我知道这是为我们好,但这很难 or 这并不容易。

我知道他们做这些为我们的好但是这条路不好走啊😭。

我知道他们做这些为我们的好是为了我们好,但是这条路不好走啊😭。

做演示后,我会写着我怎么做演示。


做演示演讲完后,我会写着我怎么做演示演讲

等做完演示后,我会写着我写我是怎么做演示。

演示后,我会写着我写我是怎么做演示

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