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little_oatleaf

March 10, 2021

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滑雪

滑双板的腿动作和滑旱冰的应该很象吧。虽然我城市以冲浪有名,我还是不会冲浪,但将来我打算学到。我终于会冲浪后,才可以尝试一下滑雪。

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滑雪

滑双板的腿动作和滑旱冰的应该很象脚上动作应该和滑旱冰很像吧。

虽然我城市以冲浪而著名,我还是不会冲浪,但将来我打算将来

我终于当我学会冲浪后,才可以尝试一下滑雪。

It's not appropriate to use 才 here. The meaning of this sentence becomes "Only when I finally learn surfing, can I try skiing."

在我学会冲浪后,再尝试一下滑雪。After I learned how to surf, I tried to learn how to ski.

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little_oatleaf

March 10, 2021

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谢谢你~!

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滑双板的腿动作和滑旱冰的应该很象吧。


滑双板的腿动作和滑旱冰的应该很象脚上动作应该和滑旱冰很像吧。

虽然我城市以冲浪有名,我还是不会冲浪,但将来我打算学到。


虽然我城市以冲浪而著名,我还是不会冲浪,但将来我打算将来

滑雪


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我终于会冲浪后,才可以尝试一下滑雪。


我终于当我学会冲浪后,才可以尝试一下滑雪。

It's not appropriate to use 才 here. The meaning of this sentence becomes "Only when I finally learn surfing, can I try skiing." 在我学会冲浪后,再尝试一下滑雪。After I learned how to surf, I tried to learn how to ski.

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