Jan. 8, 2023
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我今天很忙。我早上去健身房。我在那裡待了兩個小時。然後我和我的朋友去了湖邊。晚上我們去了星期五晚上的滑冰迪斯科舞廳。我們很開心。如果有機會，我還想再去一次。
I'm was very busy today. I went to the gym early in the morning. I was there for two hours. Then my friend and I went to the lake. In the evening we went to the Friday night ice skating disco. We were very happy. If given the chance, I would like to go again.
晚上我們去了星期五晚上去過的的滑冰迪斯科舞廳。
“In the evening we went to the skating disco we had been to on Friday night. ” Is that what you mean?
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我今天很忙。
我早上去健身房。
我在那裡待了兩個小時。
文法沒錯，但可以跟前一句合在一起，更通順
=>我早上去健身房待了兩個小時
然後我和我的朋友去了湖邊。
星期五晚上我們去了星期五晚上的滑冰迪斯科舞廳。
我們很開心。
如果有機會，我還想再去一次。
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很棒!
溜冰
我今天很忙。
我早上去了健身房。
我在那裡待了兩個小時。
然後我和我的朋友去了湖邊。
晚上我們去了星期五晚上的滑冰迪斯科舞廳。
此处「星期五晚上的」是指這舞廳只在星期五晚上營業嗎？如果是說這一天是星期五，那麼就可以說「今天是星期五。晚上我們去了滑冰舞廳」。
我們玩得很開心。
如果有機會，我還想再去一次。
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我今天很忙。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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我早上去健身房。
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我在那裡待了兩個小時。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! 我在那裡待了兩個小時。 文法沒錯，但可以跟前一句合在一起，更通順 =>我早上去健身房待了兩個小時 |
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然後我和我的朋友去了湖邊。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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晚上我們去了星期五晚上的滑冰迪斯科舞廳。 晚上我們去了星期五晚上去的滑冰迪斯科舞廳。 晚上我們去了星期五晚上的滑冰迪斯科舞廳。 不太確定這句話的意思？ 晚上我們去了星期五晚上的滑冰迪斯科舞廳。 此处「星期五晚上的」是指這舞廳只在星期五晚上營業嗎？如果是說這一天是星期五，那麼就可以說「今天是星期五。晚上我們去了滑冰舞廳」。 星期五晚上我們去了 晚上我們去了星期五晚上去過的的滑冰迪斯科舞廳。 “In the evening we went to the skating disco we had been to on Friday night. ” Is that what you mean? |
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我們很開心。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! 我們玩得很開心。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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如果有機會，我還想再去一次。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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