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游泳

最近我常常去游泳。游泳池离我家很近,票也 不贵。游泳池有窗户,可以看到城市。

我一般早上去游泳。很多人上班前去游泳,所 以有时候人很多。

我每次游三十分钟,游完以后感觉很好。

游泳
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游泳

最近我常常去游泳。

游泳池离我家很近,票也 不贵。

游泳池有窗户,可以看到城市。

我一般早上去游泳。

很多人上班前去游泳,所 以有时候人很多。

我每次游三十分钟,游完以后感觉很好。

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这篇非常流畅,用词也相当精准b( ̄▽ ̄)d

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谢谢你!🙂

游泳

最近我常常去游泳。

游泳池离我家很近,票也 不贵。

游泳池有窗户,可以看到城市。

游泳池有窗户,可以看到下方的城市。

我一般早上去游泳。

很多人上班前去游泳,所 以那里有时候人很多。

我每次游三十分钟,游完以后感觉很好。

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加油^_^

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谢谢你!

游泳


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游泳池离我家很近,票也 不贵。


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游泳池有窗户,可以看到城市。


游泳池有窗户,可以看到城市。

游泳池有窗户,可以看到下方的城市。

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我一般早上去游泳。


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很多人上班前去游泳,所 以有时候人很多。


很多人上班前去游泳,所 以那里有时候人很多。

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我每次游三十分钟,游完以后感觉很好。


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