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Rabodeaji

Oct. 23, 2024

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温哥华的秋

现在在温哥华下雨。秋天来了。夏天太长了。我不喜欢炎热的天气。热身比冷却容易。所以淋雨很烦人,但是我不介意。


It is raining in Vancouver now. Autumn has started. Summer was too long. I don't like hot weather. It's easier to warm up when you're cold than to cool down when you're hot. Although it is annoying to get wet in the rain, I do not mind.

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温哥华的秋

现在在温哥华现在在下雨。

秋天来了。

夏天太长了。

我不喜欢炎热的天气。

热身比冷却容易我更喜欢冷的天气而不是热的天气

I know your meaning, but Chinese don't speak like that. The whole sentence should be revised.

所以淋雨很烦人,但是我不介意。

温哥华的秋

现在温哥华正在下雨。

秋天来了。

今年夏天太长了。

我不喜欢炎热的天气。

热身比冷却冷的时候热身比热的时候降温容易。

所以淋雨虽然被雨淋湿很烦人,但是我不介意。

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Rabodeaji

Oct. 24, 2024

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谢谢!

现在在温哥华下雨。

现在温哥华在下雨。

秋天来了。

夏天太长了。

我不喜欢炎热的天气。

热身比冷却容易。

变热比变冷容易。

所以淋雨很烦人,但是我不介意。

虽然淋雨很烦人,但是我不介意。

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Rabodeaji

Oct. 23, 2024

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谢谢您!

温哥华的秋


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现在在温哥华下雨。

现在温哥华在下雨。

现在温哥华正在下雨。

现在在温哥华现在在下雨。

秋天来了。


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夏天太长了。


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今年夏天太长了。

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我不喜欢炎热的天气。


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热身比冷却容易。


热身比冷却容易。

变热比变冷容易。

热身比冷却冷的时候热身比热的时候降温容易。

热身比冷却容易我更喜欢冷的天气而不是热的天气

I know your meaning, but Chinese don't speak like that. The whole sentence should be revised.

所以淋雨很烦人,但是我不介意。


所以淋雨很烦人,但是我不介意。

虽然淋雨很烦人,但是我不介意。

所以淋雨虽然被雨淋湿很烦人,但是我不介意。

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