Nov. 27, 2022
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November 27,2022
After class， I'm on WeiBo. I saw a pieces of news. It is about a pop star called Kris Wu. A Chinese court sentenced him to 30 years in jail. I used to like him very much. Because I think he was handsome. But ever since I knew he committing an offense including rape. I hate him very much. The law is fair. It doesn't not fault a good man nor spare a bad man.
中文翻译：下课后，我在刷微博，我看见一条新闻，它是关于一个叫吴亦凡的流行歌手，中国法院判决他13年，我以前很喜欢他，因为我觉得他很帅，但是自从我知道他犯了罪比喻强奸，我非常讨厌他，法律是公平的，它不会冤枉一个好人，也不会放过一个坏人。
法律The Law
November 27, 2022
After class，, I'm on WeiBo.
I saw a pieces of news.
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I saw a news item.
It iwas about a pop star callnamed Kris Wu.
A Chinese court sentenced him to 30 years in jail.
I used to like him very much because I thought he was handsome.
Because I think he was handsome.
This was an incomplete sentence and, stylistically, it didn't make sense so I deleted it and appended it to the previous sentence.
But eEver since I knew he committing an offense including rapefound out that he committed crimes including rape, however, I have come to hate him a lot.
This was also an incomplete sentence so I appended the following sentence to make it complete.
I hate him very much.
The law is fair.
It doesn't not faultwrong a good man nor spare a bad manone.
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Very nice work.
November 27, 2022
In English, you must insert a blank space after each comma and period.
After class，, I'm was on WeiBo.
I saw a pieces of news.
It iwas about a pop star called Kris Wu.
A Chinese court sentenced him to 130 years in jail.
I used to like him very much. because I thought he was handsome.
But ever since I knew he had committinged an offense including rape., I have hated him very much.
The law is fair.
It doesn't not fault a good man nor spare a bad man.
Nov. 28, 2022
Thank you！
法律
November 27,2022
After class，, I'm was on WeiBo.
Tense agreement
I saw a pieces of news.
It iwas about a pop star called Kris Wu.
tense agreement
A Chinese court sentenced him to 30 years in jail.
I used to like him very much.
Because I think he was handsome.
Because I think he is handsome OR Because I thought he was handsome
Tense agreement
But ever since I knew he committing aned offenses including rape.
If you use the word 'including...' it suggested he committed more than one offense
I hate him very much.
The law is fair.
It doesn't not faultpunish a good man nor spare a bad man.
I'm not sure fault is the best word here: https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/fault
中文翻译：下课后，我在刷微博，我看见一条新闻，它是关于一个叫吴亦凡的流行歌手，中国法院判决他13年，我以前很喜欢他，因为我觉得他很帅，但是自从我知道他犯了罪比喻强奸，我非常讨厌他，法律是公平的，它不会冤枉一个好人，也不会放过一个坏人。
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Good work! Just check that your tenses are agreeing all the way through.
Nov. 27, 2022
I saw a pieces of news.
A news item/ an article/ a piece of news
Nov. 28, 2022
Thank you！
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A Chinese court sentenced him to 30 years in jail. This sentence has been marked as perfect! A Chinese court sentenced him to 13 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I used to like him very much. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I used to like him very much I used to like him very much because I thought he was handsome. |
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But ever since I knew he committing an offense including rape. But ever since I knew he committ If you use the word 'including...' it suggested he committed more than one offense But ever since I knew he had committ
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It doesn't not fault a good man nor spare a bad man. It doesn't not I'm not sure fault is the best word here: https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/fault It doesn't It doesn't |
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中文翻译：下课后，我在刷微博，我看见一条新闻，它是关于一个叫吴亦凡的流行歌手，中国法院判决他13年，我以前很喜欢他，因为我觉得他很帅，但是自从我知道他犯了罪比喻强奸，我非常讨厌他，法律是公平的，它不会冤枉一个好人，也不会放过一个坏人。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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