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Jevon

Jan. 16, 2025

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没有自信的人

我其实要成为一个更有自信的人,但是我知道那并不是简单的东西。今天我开始了改变,比昨天我对我朋友说了更多的话。我觉得这是很大的变化,我感到很高兴。我希望明天我能改变了我没有自信的性格。


I actually wanted to become a person with more self-confidence, but I know that it is not a simple thing. Today I started to change, compared to yesterday I spoke more words to my friends. I feel that this is a big changes, I felt so happy. I hope that tomorrow I could change the character of no confidence.

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没有自信的人

我其实要成为一个更有自信的人,但是我知道那并不是简单的东西

I actually wanted to become a person with more self-confidence, but I know that it is not a simple thing. Today I started to change, compared to yesterday I spoke more words to my friends. I feel that this is a big changes, I felt so happy. I hope that tomorrow I could change the character of no confidence.

今天我开始了改变,比昨天我对我朋友说了更多的话。

我觉得这是很大的变化,我感到很高兴。

我希望明天我能改变我没有自信的性格。

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Jevon

Jan. 17, 2025

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谢谢!

其实要成为一个更有自信的人,但是我知道那并不简单的东西

“我想” 在这里更通顺;

今天我开始了改变,比昨天我对我朋友说了更多的话。

我觉得这是很大的变化,我感到很高兴。

我希望明天我能改变了我没有自信的性格。

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Jevon

Jan. 17, 2025

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谢谢!

没有自信的人


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我其实要成为一个更有自信的人,但是我知道那并不是简单的东西。


其实要成为一个更有自信的人,但是我知道那并不简单的东西

“我想” 在这里更通顺;

我其实要成为一个更有自信的人,但是我知道那并不是简单的东西

I actually wanted to become a person with more self-confidence, but I know that it is not a simple thing. Today I started to change, compared to yesterday I spoke more words to my friends. I feel that this is a big changes, I felt so happy. I hope that tomorrow I could change the character of no confidence.

今天我开始了改变,比昨天我对我朋友说了更多的话。


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今天我开始了改变,比昨天我对我朋友说了更多的话。

我觉得这是很大的变化,我感到很高兴。


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我希望明天我能改变了我没有自信的性格。


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我希望明天我能改变我没有自信的性格。

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