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《沙漠水洼》:关于短暂的思考

品味着从蔚蓝无垠中落下的雨滴,
很容易忘记我是一个水洼:

在一个以干燥著称的世界里,
我是个液体异类。

每次风暴过后,云朵消失在天际,
我的存在就变成了空洞的洼地:
在坚硬的粘土中混杂着微小的尘埃。

当乌云聚集,雨滴再次出现时,生命突然回归,
然后,我周围的无数生物在短暂的疯狂中醒来。

随后,沙漠的太阳再次归来,我的肚腹再次缩小,
我曾经嬉戏的水洼变成一块焦渴的泥饼,
直到下个循环开始。

摘要:一首关于沙漠水洼生命周期的诗歌。
关键词: 沙漠水洼、干旱景观、生命周期、非人类体验


DESERT PUDDLE: Some thoughts on evanescence

Savoring raindrops
falling from blue immensities
it's easy to forget I'm a puddle –
a liquid anomaly
in a world where moisture is rare

Soon after each storm dissipates
and clouds disappear from sight
my existence becomes nothing
but a hollow depression –
a medley of microscopic dust
among hardened clay

Then when clouds thicken
and raindrops reappear
life returns suddenly
as myriads of creatures around me
awaken in brief frenzies

After that, the desert sun returns
as my belly shrinks once again
and the puddle where I once played
becomes a parched cake of dirt
until the next cycle begins

SUMMARY: A poem about the life cycle of a desert pool.
KEYWORDS: desert pools, arid portraits, life cycles, non-human experiences

自然、风景诗、沙漠风光、创意写作
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《沙漠水洼》:关于短暂的思考

品味着从蔚蓝无垠中落下的雨滴, 很容易忘记我是一个水洼: 在一个以干燥著称的世界里, 我是个液体异类。

每次风暴过后,云朵消失在天际, 我的存在就变成了空洞的洼地: 在坚硬的粘土中混杂着微小的尘埃。

当乌云聚集,雨滴再次出现时,生命突然回归, 然后,我周围的无数生物在短暂的疯狂中醒来。

随后,沙漠的太阳再次归来,我的肚腹再次缩小, 我曾经嬉戏的水洼变成一块焦渴的泥饼, 直到下个循环开始。

摘要:一首关于沙漠水洼生命周期的诗歌。

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《沙漠水洼》:关于短暂的思考


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品味着从蔚蓝无垠中落下的雨滴, 很容易忘记我是一个水洼: 在一个以干燥著称的世界里, 我是个液体异类。


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每次风暴过后,云朵消失在天际, 我的存在就变成了空洞的洼地: 在坚硬的粘土中混杂着微小的尘埃。


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当乌云聚集,雨滴再次出现时,生命突然回归, 然后,我周围的无数生物在短暂的疯狂中醒来。


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随后,沙漠的太阳再次归来,我的肚腹再次缩小, 我曾经嬉戏的水洼变成一块焦渴的泥饼, 直到下个循环开始。


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摘要:一首关于沙漠水洼生命周期的诗歌。


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