Aug. 18, 2020
我的车有电池很不好,所以我把电池换新了。很不难,但是我还有点怕。怕因为我今天以前没知道怎么换新电池。
现在我的车再活。我赢了。(ง •̀ω•́)ง✧
My car's battery died so I replaced it with a new one. It's not hard to do, but I was still a bit scared. This is because before today I didn't know how to change a car battery.
Now my car is once again alive. I won.
我车的车有电池很不好,所以我把电池换新成新的了。
很不难容易,但是我还是有点怕。
怕是因为我今天以前没知道怎么换新以前从没有换过电池。
现在我的车再活仍然能用。
我赢成功了。
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还要多练习,加油!
汽车很困。我也很困。 如果我不可以睡觉,咱们都不可以睡觉。
in this sentence, I don't catch up. IF you write English, that can help me to understand and make corrections.
我的车有电池车的电池老旧,运作得很不好,所以我必须把电池换新了。
老旧= old
必须 have to ( I think to add this word will be better)
很不虽然不(是很)难,但是我还有点怕。
很不难 no one will say that words
clearly, just say 不难 or 不是很难
"虽然... , 但是...." (Fixed collocation)
怕是因为我今天以前没在那之前不知道怎么换新电池。
没知道 don't work。
没=not=不
but with “知道 ” this word, People only say " 不知道”
现在我的车再活。又运作
活(In most of the time, 活 use in some living creature)
运作 (For machine)
我赢成功了。
赢 only in competition。
but in here, you say that you exchanged your power by yourself. you can use "成功“
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keep it up。 WELCOME TO ASK ME IF YOU HAVE ANY QUESTIONS :D
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汽车很困。我也很困。 如果我不可以睡觉,咱们都不可以睡觉。 汽车很困。我也很困。 如果我不可以睡觉,咱们都不可以睡觉。 in this sentence, I don't catch up. IF you write English, that can help me to understand and make corrections. |
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我的车有电池很不好,所以我把电池换新了。 我 老旧= old 必须 have to ( I think to add this word will be better) 我车的 |
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很不难,但是我还有点怕。
很不难 no one will say that words clearly, just say 不难 or 不是很难 "虽然... , 但是...." (Fixed collocation) 很 |
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怕因为我今天以前没知道怎么换新电池。 怕是因为我 没知道 don't work。 没=not=不 but with “知道 ” this word, People only say " 不知道” 怕是因为我 |
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现在我的车再活。 现在我的车 活(In most of the time, 活 use in some living creature) 运作 (For machine) 现在我的车 |
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我赢了。 我 赢 only in competition。 but in here, you say that you exchanged your power by yourself. you can use "成功“ 我 |
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(ง •̀ω•́)ง✧ |
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