May 7, 2020
最近看的中文电视节目
大家好，好久不见！既然检疫开始的时候，我有更多空学习并且练习中文。我最近看一部真人秀叫《青春有你2》练习中文。在这部节目，一百九位娱乐公司见习员比赛进入一支女乐队。在每个片段，每个女生进入一个组表演一首歌。然后观众排名她们。有的选手被排名消除的。我最喜欢的选手是赵小堂，许佳琪，和上官喜爱。我希望她们赢。
Hello everyone, long time no see! Since quarantine started, I have more time to study and review Chinese. I've recently been watching a reality TV show called "Youth With You 2" to practice Chinese. In this show, 109 entertainment company trainees compete to enter a girl group. In each episode, every girl goes into a group to perform a song. After that, the audience ranks them. Some contestants get eliminated by the ranking. My favorite contestants are Zhao Xiaotang, Xu Jiaqi, and Shangguan Xi'ai. I hope they win.
既然检疫开始的时候，我有更多空学习并且防疫隔离开始之后，我有更多（空闲） 时间来学习和练习中文。
有更多空 is wired. 有空 is a fixed phrase and only used in oral Chinese.
我最近在看一部真人秀叫《青春有你2》的真人秀来练习中文。
在这部节目，一百零九位娱乐公司的见习员比赛进入一支女乐队来比赛。
109 is 一百零九, no such expression like 一百九.
在每个不同的片段中，每个女生进入一个组表演不同的小组演唱一首歌。
I don't know whether this express the same thing as you wish. And though "each" should be translated to 每个, the continuous use of 每个 is wired.
然后观众对她们进行排名她们。
有的选手被排名消除的会在排名中被淘汰。
我希望她们赢能获胜。
希望她们赢 is ok, but 能获胜 is more suitable in article.
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最近看的中文电视节目 |
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大家好，好久不见！ |
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既然检疫开始的时候，我有更多空学习并且练习中文。
有更多空 is wired. 有空 is a fixed phrase and only used in oral Chinese. |
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我最近看一部真人秀叫《青春有你2》练习中文。 我最近在看一部 |
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在这部节目，一百九位娱乐公司见习员比赛进入一支女乐队。 在这部节目，一百零九位娱乐公司的见习员 109 is 一百零九, no such expression like 一百九. |
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在每个片段，每个女生进入一个组表演一首歌。 在 I don't know whether this express the same thing as you wish. And though "each" should be translated to 每个, the continuous use of 每个 is wired. |
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然后观众排名她们。 然后观众对她们进行排名 |
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有的选手被排名消除的。 有的选手 |
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我最喜欢的选手是赵小堂，许佳琪，和上官喜爱。 |
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我希望她们赢。 我希望她们 希望她们赢 is ok, but 能获胜 is more suitable in article. |
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