May 17, 2025
最好的礼物
我收到最好礼物是一条爷爷留下的围巾。
围巾很暖和，也很漂亮。
冬天的时候我戴围巾，
感觉很舒服。
这条围巾让我想起爷爷，
当他还在的时候。
这是我很喜欢的礼物。
The best gift I received was a scarf left to me by my grandfather.
The scarf is warm and beautiful.
I wear it in winter,
and it feels very cosy.
The scarf reminds me of my grandfather
when he was still alive.
It’s my favourite gift.
最好的礼物
我收到最好礼物是一条爷爷留下的围巾。
围巾很暖和，也很漂亮。
冬天的时候我戴围巾， 感觉很舒服。
这条围巾让我想起爷爷， 当他还在的时候。
这是我很喜欢的礼物。
May 19, 2025
谢谢你。
最好的礼物
我收到最好礼物是一条爷爷留下的围巾。
围巾很暖和，也很漂亮。
冬天的时候我戴围巾， 感觉很舒服。
这条围巾让我想起爷爷， 当他还在的时候。
这是我很喜欢的礼物。
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我收到的最好的礼物是一条爷爷留给我的围巾。
这条围巾既暖和又漂亮。
冬天的时候我会戴着它，
感觉非常舒适。
这条围巾让我想起爷爷还在世的时候。
这是我的最爱。
May 18, 2025
谢谢你。
最好的礼物
我收到最好礼物是一条爷爷留下的围巾。
围巾很暖和，也很漂亮。
¶我会在冬天的时候我戴围巾，
¶戴它，¶
感觉
它戴着很舒服。
“冬天的时候我戴围巾， 感觉很舒服。”これは間違いないです。
这条围巾让我想起爷爷， 当他还在的时候。
这是我很喜欢的礼物。
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我没有戴过围巾........也不会戴围巾.......
May 18, 2025
谢谢你。ありがとうございます。
最好的礼物
我收到最好礼物是一条爷爷留下的围巾。
围巾很暖和，也很漂亮。
¶冬天的时候我戴着围巾，
¶
感觉很舒服。
¶这条围巾让我想起爷爷，
¶¶
当
想起他还在的时候。
Is this a poem? If yes, you can change it to the above. If not,“这条围巾让我想起爷爷还在的时候。”would sound more natural.
¶这是我很最喜欢的礼物。
“很喜欢”可以有很多个。“最喜欢”只有一个。
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是个很感人的故事，爷爷一定很爱你。(˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶) ‹𝟹
写得很好！基本完美，没有任何大问题。
要继续加油喔！( ◡̀_◡́)ᕤ
May 17, 2025
谢谢你看得这么细！
我写这篇的时候确实有点小情绪上来了（笑）。
能被你说“基本完美”，我就当是“完美”好了。(๑˃̵ᴗ˂̵)و ✧
我会继续卷起来的，你也别偷懒啊～(ง •̀_•́)ง
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