July 2, 2022
最后一班飞机
“为你祝福，”男人说了。
德克翻了白眼。"老好人。“
"因果，“伊娃改了。
他们在山上停了，在国际屋的外边，德克斯越过她朝海湾看去，似乎他欣赏了风景.
"Bless you," the man said.
Dex rolled his eyes. "Bleeding heart."
"Karma," Eva corrected.
They stopped at the top of the hill, outside the International House, and Dex looked past her toward the bay, as if admiring the view.
“为你祝福，”男人说了。
德克翻了个白眼。：
"老好人。“
或许“烂好人”更适合他的情绪？
"因果，“伊娃改了纠正道。
抱歉，我不太明白，她是说这是因果报应吗？
他们在山上停了顶停下，在国际屋的外边，德克斯越过她朝海湾朝她看去，似乎他欣赏了风景.这个观点。
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很简短的故事，塑造了人物的形象，很棒，但或许你可以补充一些故事信息，这样更便于于纠正。:-)
最后一班飞机
“为你祝福你，”男人说了。
德克翻了个白眼。
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"老好人。“
"因果，“伊娃改了。
i'm not sure about your original meaning so cannot make any suggestions. :)
他们在山上停了下来，在国际屋的外边，德克斯越过她朝海湾看去，似乎他在欣赏了风景.
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加油！
最后一班飞机
“为你祝福，.”男人说了道。
德克翻了白眼。
"老好人。“
"因果，“伊娃改了口说道。
他们在山上停了，在国际屋的外边，德克斯越过她朝海湾看去，似乎他欣赏了风景.
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句子没什么问题，但是这看起来是某个故事中截取的一段话，只看这些话并不太能领略到其中的背景。
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“为你祝福，”男人说了。 “为你祝福 “ “为你祝福，”男人说 |
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德克翻了白眼。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! 德克翻了个白眼。 个 unit 德克翻了个白眼 |
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"老好人。“ This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! "老好人。“ 或许“烂好人”更适合他的情绪？ |
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"因果，“伊娃改了。 "因果 "因果，“伊娃改了。 i'm not sure about your original meaning so cannot make any suggestions. :) "因果，“伊娃 抱歉，我不太明白，她是说这是因果报应吗？ |
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他们在山上停了，在国际屋的外边，德克斯越过她朝海湾看去，似乎他欣赏了风景. This sentence has been marked as perfect! 他们在山上停 他们在山 |
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