Sept. 28, 2020
智齿
上个周四我的智齿被拔出来了。已经过了四天，但是嘴里还是很疼。手术以后的两天，我的嘴巴流血了很多，嘴里一直有血的味道。昨天终于止血了。因为手术是最近发生的，我还是只能吃很软的食物。我吃了很多酸奶和炒蛋，还有喝了很多汤。现在也能吃面条，可是只能吃又小又软的面条。我特别期待再能吃任何东西。
上个周四我的智齿被拔出来了拔了智齿。
Your sentence doesn’t have any grammatical problem and we can understand your meaning completely, but we native speakers don’t say it that way.
手术以后的两天，我的嘴巴流血了很多血，嘴里一直有血的味道。
因为手术是最近发生的刚做了手术，我还是只能吃很软的食物。
我吃了很多酸奶和炒蛋，还有喝了很多汤。
现在也能可以吃面条了，可是只能吃又小又软的面条。
Your sentence is right, you can say that way. I just show you another way to say it.
我特别期待再能尽快康复，可以吃任何东西。
We can understand your meaning, but the sentence is kind of unnatural, I adjusted it a little that made it smooth and natural. And more like mother tongue expression.
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智齿 |
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上个周四我的智齿被拔出来了。 上 Your sentence doesn’t have any grammatical problem and we can understand your meaning completely, but we native speakers don’t say it that way. |
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已经过了四天，但是嘴里还是很疼。 |
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手术以后的两天，我的嘴巴流血了很多，嘴里一直有血的味道。 手术 |
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昨天终于止血了。 |
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因为手术是最近发生的，我还是只能吃很软的食物。 因为 |
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我吃了很多酸奶和炒蛋，还有喝了很多汤。 我吃了很多酸奶和炒蛋，还 |
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现在也能吃面条，可是只能吃又小又软的面条。 现在 Your sentence is right, you can say that way. I just show you another way to say it. |
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我特别期待再能吃任何东西。 我特别期待 We can understand your meaning, but the sentence is kind of unnatural, I adjusted it a little that made it smooth and natural. And more like mother tongue expression. |
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