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tongxing

Nov. 27, 2022

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日语课

November 26, 2022
I attended a 3 hour Japanese class, Although it was very long, I was very happy because I am interested in Japanese. I felt very comfortable when attending class. My Japanese teacher also is very gentle and funny. She is very cute .I very like her. If I have the chance, I will definitely travel to Japan. Japanese culture sounds very interesting.

我上了三个小时的日语课,尽管它非常长,但是我很开心,因为我对日语感兴趣,上课的时候我感觉很舒服,我的日语老师也很温柔和有趣,她非常的可爱,我非常喜欢她,如果有机会,我一定会去日本旅游,日本文化听起来非常有趣。

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日语课Japanese Language Class

November 26, 2022

I attended a 3 -hour Japanese class,. Although it was very long, I was very happy because I am interested in Japanese.

That is indeed a long class!

I felt very comfortable when attending class.

My Japanese teacher also is very gentle and funny.

She is very cute .I very. I like her very much.

or

I very much like her.

If I have the chance, I will definitely travel to Japan.

I highly recommend it if you're learning Japanese. I learned a lot from traveling there.

Japanese culture sounds very interesting.

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よく出来ました!頑張って下さい。

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tongxing

Nov. 27, 2022

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thank you!

I attended a 3 hour Japanese class, Although it was very long, I was very happyenjoyed it because I am interested in Japanese.

Gramatically fine, could phrase it as "I enjoyed it" instead of "I was very happy"

I felt very comfortable when attending class.

You could say "relaxed" instead of "comfortable" but both are fine

My Japanese teacher also is very gentle and funny.

She is very cute .I ver. I really like her.

If I have the chance, I will definitely travel to Japan.

Japanese culture sounds very interesting.

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写得好 :)

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bailanlala

Nov. 27, 2022

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If I have the chance, I will definitely travel to Japan.

Oh, actually, maybe say "would" instead of “will." Both are grammatically correct, but "would" sounds better since it's hypothetical (因为你不一定会去的,这只是个希望)

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tongxing

Nov. 27, 2022

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thank you!

I attended a 3 hour Japanese class,. Although it was very long, I was very happy because I am interested in Japanese.

I would phrase it like this "Despite how long it was, I wasn't bored because I am interested in Japanese."

I felt very comfortable when attending class.

My Japanese teacher is also is very gentle and funny.

She is very cute .I very. I like her a lot.

If I haveget the chance, I will definitely travel to Japan.

日语课


日语课Japanese Language Class

November 26, 2022


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I attended a 3 hour Japanese class, Although it was very long, I was very happy because I am interested in Japanese.


I attended a 3 hour Japanese class,. Although it was very long, I was very happy because I am interested in Japanese.

I would phrase it like this "Despite how long it was, I wasn't bored because I am interested in Japanese."

I attended a 3 hour Japanese class, Although it was very long, I was very happyenjoyed it because I am interested in Japanese.

Gramatically fine, could phrase it as "I enjoyed it" instead of "I was very happy"

I attended a 3 -hour Japanese class,. Although it was very long, I was very happy because I am interested in Japanese.

That is indeed a long class!

I felt very comfortable when attending class.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I felt very comfortable when attending class.

You could say "relaxed" instead of "comfortable" but both are fine

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My Japanese teacher also is very gentle and funny.


My Japanese teacher is also is very gentle and funny.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

She is very cute .I very like her.


She is very cute .I very. I like her a lot.

She is very cute .I ver. I really like her.

She is very cute .I very. I like her very much.

or I very much like her.

If I have the chance, I will definitely travel to Japan.


If I haveget the chance, I will definitely travel to Japan.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If I have the chance, I will definitely travel to Japan.

I highly recommend it if you're learning Japanese. I learned a lot from traveling there.

Japanese culture sounds very interesting.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我上了三个小时的日语课,尽管它非常长,但是我很开心,因为我对日语感兴趣,上课的时候我感觉很舒服,我的日语老师也很温柔和有趣,她非常的可爱,我非常喜欢她,如果有机会,我一定会去日本旅游,日本文化听起来非常有趣。


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