Sept. 29, 2020
最近天气慢慢越来越冷了,今天早上我不想离开被窝!昨天晚上睡得不舒服,醒了好几次。六点钟起床,急急忙忙准备,六点半出门了。幸运地今天电车没晚点,准时上班了。今天我不怎么忙,学习一下,跟同事聊天了。还有三十分钟我就下班了!早起累死了。。。
最近天气慢慢越来越冷了,今天早上我不想离开被窝!
慢慢, 越来越.... are similar words as adv.; meaning gradually or incrementally in English
So you can write ;
1] 最近天气越来越冷了
2] 最近天气慢慢变冷
昨天晚上睡得不舒服,好,冻醒了好几次。
不舒服; in a small range, sound like something effect you don't sleep with, it is hard to explain. en...........
睡得不好 could describe in a big range.
I add 冻 for a relationship with the last sentence. because the weather is cold, I am wake up a few at night by cool.
六点钟起床,急急忙忙准备匆忙洗漱,六点半就出门了。
急急忙忙 和 匆忙 are similar words. it doesn't have a huge difference to me as Chinese readers.
for the last part, you can keep the " 了“ which means the tense is pass and finish.
幸运地的是,今天电车没晚点,能准时上班了。
早起累死了。。。......
I have a different idea with your last sentence. Jack changed one-word " 今天” which means “ Today, I am so tired."
but in your original sentence, your means; " wake up early is tired."
so let me know what ideas you want to say.
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Good job. If have any question, please feel to ask me.
最近天气慢慢越来越冷了,今天早上我都不想离开被窝起床!
昨天晚上睡得不舒服眠不太好,醒了好几次。
早上六点钟起床,急急忙忙准备洗漱完毕,六点半出门了。
幸运地的是今天电车没晚点,能准时上班了。
今天我不怎么忙,学习一下,跟同事聊聊天了。
早起今天累死了。。。
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写的不错。我的更改仅供你参考,有什么问题可以继续问我。
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最近天气慢慢越来越冷了,今天早上我不想离开被窝! 最近天气 最近天气 慢慢, 越来越.... are similar words as adv.; meaning gradually or incrementally in English So you can write ; 1] 最近天气越来越冷了 2] 最近天气慢慢变冷 |
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昨天晚上睡得不舒服,醒了好几次。 昨天晚上睡 昨天晚上睡得不 不舒服; in a small range, sound like something effect you don't sleep with, it is hard to explain. en........... 睡得不好 could describe in a big range. I add 冻 for a relationship with the last sentence. because the weather is cold, I am wake up a few at night by cool. |
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六点钟起床,急急忙忙准备,六点半出门了。 早上六点 六点钟起床, 急急忙忙 和 匆忙 are similar words. it doesn't have a huge difference to me as Chinese readers. for the last part, you can keep the " 了“ which means the tense is pass and finish. |
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幸运地今天电车没晚点,准时上班了。 幸运 幸运 |
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今天我不怎么忙,学习一下,跟同事聊天了。 今天我不怎么忙,学习一下,跟同事聊聊天 |
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还有三十分钟我就下班了! |
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早起累死了。。。
早起累死了 I have a different idea with your last sentence. Jack changed one-word " 今天” which means “ Today, I am so tired." but in your original sentence, your means; " wake up early is tired." so let me know what ideas you want to say. |
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