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Toluwani

Feb. 17, 2025

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拍花

今天我去买东西的时候,发现了一棵树。树上有美白花。白花有小黄色。那时我没带了手机,所以我选择回来的时候,可以带了手机。回来时,我想用手机拍照。但树太高,也有日照。所以我不能拍😪。


Today when I went to buy something, I found a tree. There are beautiful white flowers on the tree. The white flowers have tints of yellow colour. I didn't bring my phone with me at that time, so I decided to bring my phone when I came back. When I came back, I wanted to take pictures with my phone. But the tree was too high and there was sunlight. So I couldn't take pictures 😪.

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拍花

今天我去买东西的时候,发现了一棵开花的树。

Today when I went to buy something, I found a tree. There are beautiful white flowers on the tree. The white flowers have tints of yellow colour. I didn't bring my phone with me at that time, so I decided to bring my phone when I came back. When I came back, I wanted to take pictures with my phone. But the tree was too high and there was sunlight. So I couldn't take pictures

树上有美白花丽的白色花朵

白花有小那些花上还带点儿淡黄色。

那时我没带手机,所以我选择回来的时候,可以带了手机决定带上手机再回来

回来时,我想用手机拍照。

但树太高,也有日光正照着

所以我能拍😪。

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Toluwani

Feb. 18, 2025

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谢谢您。好久不见,原来您无恙。

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Tammy

Feb. 19, 2025

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好久不见。

但是你不能说“原来您无恙”😄

“好久不见,很高兴再见到您”或者“好久不见,但愿过去几天你一切都好”,这两种都可以。

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Toluwani

March 5, 2025

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啊,谢谢您的修改。🙏🏾

今天我去买东西的时候,发现看见了一棵树。

树上有些漂亮(美丽)的白花。

白花有小带点黄色。

那时我没带手机,所以我选择回来的时候,可以带了带上手机。

回来时,我想用手机拍照。

但树太高,也有日照。

所以我不能拍😪。

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写得好!

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Toluwani

Feb. 18, 2025

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再次感谢您。

拍花


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今天我去买东西的时候,发现了一棵树。


今天我去买东西的时候,发现看见了一棵树。

今天我去买东西的时候,发现了一棵开花的树。

Today when I went to buy something, I found a tree. There are beautiful white flowers on the tree. The white flowers have tints of yellow colour. I didn't bring my phone with me at that time, so I decided to bring my phone when I came back. When I came back, I wanted to take pictures with my phone. But the tree was too high and there was sunlight. So I couldn't take pictures

树上有美白花。


树上有些漂亮(美丽)的白花。

树上有美白花丽的白色花朵

白花有小黄色。


白花有小带点黄色。

白花有小那些花上还带点儿淡黄色。

那时我没带了手机,所以我选择回来的时候,可以带了手机。


那时我没带手机,所以我选择回来的时候,可以带了带上手机。

那时我没带手机,所以我选择回来的时候,可以带了手机决定带上手机再回来

回来时,我想用手机拍照。


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但树太高,也有日照。


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但树太高,也有日光正照着

所以我不能拍😪。


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所以我能拍😪。

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