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lsk_pen

Aug. 5, 2023

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打扫我的阳台

我住在城区的公寓,公寓在三楼。这个公寓还有一个好看的阳台,可是最近上面有点儿脏,所以,我今天决定把它打扫了。

然而,我楼下有邻居,我不想把脏东西掉落在他们的阳台上。所以,我带了一桶水和一卷纸巾,仔细地打扫了阳台。我把那卷纸巾用光了。

打扫完了以后,我的阳台终于干净了。


I live in a third floor apartment in the city. The apartment has a very nice balcony, but it's been dirty recently. So today I decided to clean it.

However, I have downstairs neighbors, and I did not want to drip anything dirty onto their balcony. Therefore, I brought a bucket and a roll of paper towels, and carefully cleaned it. I used an entire roll of paper towels.

After cleaning it, my balcony is finally clean!

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打扫我的阳台

我住在城区的公寓,公寓在三楼。

这个公寓还有一个好看的阳台,可是最近上面有点儿脏,所以,我今天决定把它打扫了。



然而,我楼下有邻居,我不想把脏东西掉落在他们的阳台上。

所以,我带了一桶水和一卷纸巾,仔细地打扫了阳台。

我把那卷纸巾用光了。



打扫完了以后,我的阳台终于干净了。

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打扫我的阳台

我住在城区的公寓,公寓在三楼。

这个公寓还有一个好看的阳台,可是最近上面有点儿脏,所以,我今天决定把它打扫了。



然而,我楼下有邻居,我不想把脏东西掉落在他们的阳台上。

所以,我带了一桶水和一卷纸巾,仔细地打扫了阳台。

我把那卷纸巾用光了。



打扫完了以后,我的阳台终于干净了。

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没有找到一处错误,有点失望。

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atlantony

Aug. 6, 2023

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然而,我楼下有邻居,我不想把脏东西掉落在他们的阳台上。

“落在”应改为“落到”

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Jack

Aug. 6, 2023

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“落在”应改为“落到”

对,落到更贴切。

打扫我的阳台


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我住在城区的公寓,公寓在三楼。


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这个公寓还有一个好看的阳台,可是最近上面有点儿脏,所以,我今天决定把它打扫了。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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然而,我楼下有邻居,我不想把脏东西掉落在他们的阳台上。




然而,我楼下有邻居,我不想把脏东西掉落在他们的阳台上。



然而,我楼下有邻居,我不想把脏东西掉落在他们的阳台上。

所以,我带了一桶水和一卷纸巾,仔细地打扫了阳台。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我把那卷纸巾用光了。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

打扫完了以后,我的阳台终于干净了。




打扫完了以后,我的阳台终于干净了。



打扫完了以后,我的阳台终于干净了。

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