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May 18, 2025

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我眼中最美的中国建筑

我眼中最美的中国建筑是天坛。故宫和颐和园都既漂亮又宏伟,可是我认为最美的中国建筑莫过于天坛。

去中国旅行时,我参观了上海的豫园、杭州的西湖、苏州的园林(网师园和拙政园)和北京最有名的名胜古迹。每一座建筑都有独特的特点,有意思的历史。最有意思的中国建筑是故宫,可是天坛的圆形结构和鲜艳的颜色更吸引眼睛。

可悲的是,我星期一参观天坛,只能看到外面。


The most beautiful Chinese building in my opinion is the Temple of Heaven. The Forbidden City and the Summer Palace are both beautiful and magnificent, but I think the most beautiful Chinese building is the Temple of Heaven.

When I traveled to China, I visited the Yu Garden in Shanghai, the West Lake in Hangzhou, the traditional gardens in Suzhou (the Net Master Garden and the Humble Administrator's Garden) and the most famous tourist places in Beijing. Each building has unique characteristics and interesting history. The most interesting Chinese building is the Forbidden City, but the round structure and bright colors of the Temple of Heaven are more eye-catching.

Sadly, I visited the Temple of Heaven on a Monday and was only able to see the outside.

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我眼中最美的中国建筑

我眼中最美的中国建筑是天坛。

The most beautiful Chinese building in my opinion is the Temple of Heaven. The Forbidden City and the Summer Palace are both beautiful and magnificent, but I think the most beautiful Chinese building is the Temple of Heaven.

When I traveled to China, I visited the Yu Garden in Shanghai, the West Lake in Hangzhou, the traditional gardens in Suzhou (the Net Master Garden and the Humble Administrator's Garden) and the most famous tourist places in Beijing. Each building has unique characteristics and interesting history. The most interesting Chinese building is the Forbidden City, but the round structure and bright colors of the Temple of Heaven are more eye-catching.

Sadly, I visited the Temple of Heaven on a Monday and was only able to see the outside.

故宫和颐和园都既漂亮又宏伟,可是我认为最美的中国建筑莫过于天坛。



去中国旅行时,我参观了上海的豫园、杭州的西湖、苏州的园林(网师园和拙政园)和北京
一些最有名的名胜古迹。

每一座建筑都有独特的特点地方,有意思的历史。

独特的特点——词语冗赘了

最有意思的中国建筑是故宫,可是天坛的圆形结构和鲜艳的颜色更吸引眼



可悲

遗憾
的是,我星期一参观天坛是在星期一,那天只能看到外

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LevelingUpMyChinese

May 19, 2025

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非常感谢您的指正!:)

我眼中最美的中国建筑

我眼中最美的中国建筑是天坛。

故宫和颐和园都既漂亮又宏伟,可是我认为最美的中国建筑莫过于天坛。

去中国旅行时,我参观了上海的豫园、杭州的西湖、苏州的园林(网师园和拙政园)和北京最有名的名胜古迹。

每一座建筑都有独特的特点,有意思的历史。

最有意思的中国建筑是故宫,可是天坛的圆形结构和鲜艳的颜色更吸引眼睛。

可悲的是,我星期一参观天坛,只能看到外面。

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Jack

May 18, 2025

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在我看来,中国最美丽的建筑是天坛。故宫和颐和园都美轮美奂,但我认为中国最美丽的建筑是天坛。
我去中国旅行时,游览了上海的豫园、杭州的西湖、苏州的传统园林(网师园和拙政园)以及北京最著名的旅游景点。每一处建筑都有其独特的特色和有趣的历史。最有趣的中国建筑是故宫,但天坛的圆形结构和鲜艳的色彩更引人注目。
遗憾的是,我周一去的天坛,只能看到外面。

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LevelingUpMyChinese

May 18, 2025

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谢谢!

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我眼中最美的中国建筑是天坛。


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我眼中最美的中国建筑是天坛。

The most beautiful Chinese building in my opinion is the Temple of Heaven. The Forbidden City and the Summer Palace are both beautiful and magnificent, but I think the most beautiful Chinese building is the Temple of Heaven. When I traveled to China, I visited the Yu Garden in Shanghai, the West Lake in Hangzhou, the traditional gardens in Suzhou (the Net Master Garden and the Humble Administrator's Garden) and the most famous tourist places in Beijing. Each building has unique characteristics and interesting history. The most interesting Chinese building is the Forbidden City, but the round structure and bright colors of the Temple of Heaven are more eye-catching. Sadly, I visited the Temple of Heaven on a Monday and was only able to see the outside.

故宫和颐和园都既漂亮又宏伟,可是我认为最美的中国建筑莫过于天坛。


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故宫和颐和园都既漂亮又宏伟,可是我认为最美的中国建筑莫过于天坛。

去中国旅行时,我参观了上海的豫园、杭州的西湖、苏州的园林(网师园和拙政园)和北京最有名的名胜古迹。


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去中国旅行时,我参观了上海的豫园、杭州的西湖、苏州的园林(网师园和拙政园)和北京
一些最有名的名胜古迹。

每一座建筑都有独特的特点,有意思的历史。


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每一座建筑都有独特的特点地方,有意思的历史。

独特的特点——词语冗赘了

最有意思的中国建筑是故宫,可是天坛的圆形结构和鲜艳的颜色更吸引眼睛。


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最有意思的中国建筑是故宫,可是天坛的圆形结构和鲜艳的颜色更吸引眼

可悲的是,我星期一参观天坛,只能看到外面。


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可悲

遗憾
的是,我星期一参观天坛是在星期一,那天只能看到外

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