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我的星期六

我每星期六喜欢做运动。上午我和我的朋友Oscar一起在山去骑自行车,之后我在他的家下棋。

午饭我去我的家庭家,我的妈妈爸爸很高兴!我买冰淇淋,我们都吃冰淇淋。它很好吃!

晚上在家我学习汉语和看电影。


I like to do exercise every Saturday. During the morning I go together with my friend Oscar to ride by bike at the mountains, after that we play chess at his house.

For lunch I go to my family house, my mom and dad are very happy. I buy ice-cream and we eat it together, its very good!

At night I'm at home studying Chinese and watching movies.

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我的星期六

我每星期六喜欢做运动。

上午我和我的朋友Oscar一起在山骑自行车,之后我在他的家下棋。



午饭我去我的家庭家,我的妈妈爸爸很高兴!

我买冰淇淋,我们都吃冰淇淋。

晚上在家我学习汉语和看电影。

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我的星期六

我每星期六每周六,我喜欢做运动。

上午我和我的朋友Oscar一起在山去骑去山里骑了自行车,之后我他的家下棋。



午饭我去我的家庭

午饭是去的我
家,我的妈妈爸爸很高兴!

我买冰淇淋,我们都吃冰淇淋。

很好吃!



晚上在家
,我要学习汉语和看电影。

我的星期六

我每星期六喜欢做运动。

上午我和我的朋友Oscar一起在山去去山里骑自行车,之后我在他家下棋。



午饭我去我的家庭家,我的妈妈爸爸很高兴!

I don't know how to say family house in Chinese... If the house is usually occupied by your parents, you could say 我爸妈家.
By the way mom and dad usually translates to 爸爸妈妈 in Chinese.

我买冰淇淋,我们都吃冰淇淋大家一起吃

它很好吃!

晚上在家我学习汉语和看电影。

我的星期六


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我每星期六喜欢做运动。


我每星期六每周六,我喜欢做运动。

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上午我和我的朋友Oscar一起在山去骑自行车,之后我在他的家下棋。


上午我和我的朋友Oscar一起在山去骑去山里骑了自行车,之后我他的家下棋。

上午我和我的朋友Oscar一起在山去去山里骑自行车,之后我在他家下棋。

上午我和我的朋友Oscar一起在山骑自行车,之后我在他的家下棋。

午饭我去我的家庭家,我的妈妈爸爸很高兴!




午饭我去我的家庭家,我的妈妈爸爸很高兴!

I don't know how to say family house in Chinese... If the house is usually occupied by your parents, you could say 我爸妈家. By the way mom and dad usually translates to 爸爸妈妈 in Chinese.



午饭我去我的家庭

午饭是去的我
家,我的妈妈爸爸很高兴!



午饭我去我的家庭家,我的妈妈爸爸很高兴!

我买冰淇淋,我们都吃冰淇淋。


我买冰淇淋,我们都吃冰淇淋大家一起吃

我买冰淇淋,我们都吃冰淇淋。

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它很好吃!


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很好吃!

晚上在家我学习汉语和看电影。


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晚上在家
,我要学习汉语和看电影。

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