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May 27, 2024

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我的早上例行公事

大家好。今天我想告诉你们我的早上例行公事。我每天早上五点半起床。刷牙和洗澡的时候我喜欢听音乐。穿衣服之后吃早餐。出门之前收拾床。我早上七点去医院。七点半开始工作。


Hello everyone. Today I want to tell you about my morning routine. I get up at half past five every morning. I like to listen to music while I brush my teeth and take a shower. I have breakfast after getting dressed. Before I go out, I make my bed. I go to the hospital at seven in the morning. I start work at half past seven.

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我的早上行公事

“例行公事”跟“惯例”的意思差不多,但前者带有一定的机械性和强制性,有消极的形式主义的感觉。

大家好。

今天我想告诉你们我的早上例行公事日常

我每天早上五点半起床。

刷牙和洗澡的时候我喜欢听音乐。

穿衣服之后吃早餐。

出门之前收拾床。

我早上七点去医院。

七点半开始工作。

今天我想告诉你们我每天早上例行公事。

我每天早上五点半起床。

刷牙和洗澡的时候我喜欢听音乐。

穿衣服之后吃早餐。

出门之前收拾床。

我早上七点去医院。

七点半开始工作。

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写得很好!

我的早上例行公事晨间流程

I doubt whether there's a corresponding phrase for "morning routine" in Chinese. Maybe "晨间习惯" or "晨间流程" is better. If I'm talking to my friends who also speak English, I'd just say "我的 morning routine."

大家好。

今天我想告诉你们我的早上例行公事跟大家讲讲我的晨间流程

我每天早上五点半起床

刷牙洗澡的时候喜欢听音乐。

穿我穿好衣服之后吃早餐

出门之前收拾床会整理床铺

我早上七点去医院

七点半开始工作。

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I'd say the writing is very clear! Just tried to make it more natural by connecting the sentences together.

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DBee

May 27, 2024

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I'll keep that in mind for next time :) 谢了啊!

七点半开始工作。


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我的早上例行公事


我的早上例行公事晨间流程

I doubt whether there's a corresponding phrase for "morning routine" in Chinese. Maybe "晨间习惯" or "晨间流程" is better. If I'm talking to my friends who also speak English, I'd just say "我的 morning routine."

我的早上行公事

“例行公事”跟“惯例”的意思差不多,但前者带有一定的机械性和强制性,有消极的形式主义的感觉。

大家好。


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今天我想告诉你们我的早上例行公事。


今天我想告诉你们我的早上例行公事跟大家讲讲我的晨间流程

今天我想告诉你们我每天早上例行公事。

今天我想告诉你们我的早上例行公事日常

我每天早上五点半起床。


我每天早上五点半起床

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刷牙和洗澡的时候我喜欢听音乐。


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穿衣服之后吃早餐。


穿我穿好衣服之后吃早餐

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出门之前收拾床。


出门之前收拾床会整理床铺

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