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Jan. 12, 2021

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我的房子

我的房子在方便地方,就在公共汽车站旁边。房子对面有超市和药店。我的房子有两个层。一楼有一个厨房,在厨房对面有洗衣房和厕所。厨房旁边有一个大客厅。在二楼有我和丈夫的卧室,旁边是一间大浴室和壁橱。我们房间的对面有两个房间,我的大女儿的房间和我的小女儿的房间。
我们最喜欢的房间是客厅。我们在那里呆很多时间。我们在那里吃饭,看电视,看书,女儿做作业,丈夫和我工作,女儿嬉戏,我和我的狗玩。窗户旁边有一个大沙发,沙发对面有一台大电视。沙发左边有一张大桌子供我们吃饭。沙发右边有一架钢琴。我和大女儿真喜欢弹钢琴。沙发前有一张小桌子,在小桌子上很多书,两个笔记本和平板电脑。


My house is well situated. It is next to the bus stop. Opposite there is supermarket and drugstore. My house has 2 floors. On the ground floor there is a kitchen, opposite the kitchen there is a laundry room and a toilet. Next to the kitchen there is a big living room. On the 1st floor there is my and my husband’s bedroom, and next to it there is a big bathroom and walking closet. Opposite our room there are 2 rooms, my elder daughter’s room and my little daughter’s room.
Our favourite room is a living room. We spend there a lot of time there. We eat there, we watch TV, we read books, daughters do their homework, we work there, daughters paly there and I play with the dog there.
At the window there is a big sofa, opposite the sofa on the wall there is a big TV. To the left from the sofa there is a big a table where we eat. To the right from the sofa there is a piano. My elder daughter and I really like playing piano. In front of the sofa there is a small table with lots of the books and a couple notebooks and tablets.

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我的房子

我的房子在方便地方,就在公共汽车站旁边,很方便

房子对面有超市和药店。

我的房子有两层。

厨房旁边有一个大客厅。

我们最喜欢的房间是客厅。

我们在那里吃饭,看电视,看书,女儿做作业,丈夫和我工作,女儿嬉戏,我和我的狗玩。

窗户旁边有一个大沙发,沙发对面有一台大电视。

沙发左边有一张大桌子供我们吃饭。

沙发右边有一架钢琴。

我和大女儿喜欢弹钢琴。

沙发前有一张小桌子,小桌子上很多书,两个还有笔记本和平板电脑。

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valeriaswe

Jan. 13, 2021

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Thank you Jack! :-)

我的房子


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我的房子在方便地方,就在公共汽车站旁边。


我的房子在方便地方,就在公共汽车站旁边,很方便

房子对面有超市和药店。


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我的房子有两个层。


我的房子有两层。

在二楼有我和丈夫的卧室,旁边是一间大浴室和壁橱。


我们房间的对面有两个房间,我的大女儿的房间和我的小女儿的房间。


我们最喜欢的房间是客厅。


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我们在那里呆很多时间。


我们在那里吃饭,看电视,看书,女儿做作业,丈夫和我工作,女儿嬉戏,我和我的狗玩。


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窗户旁边有一个大沙发,沙发对面有一台大电视。


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沙发左边有一张大桌子供我们吃饭。


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沙发右边有一架钢琴。


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我和大女儿真喜欢弹钢琴。


我和大女儿喜欢弹钢琴。

沙发前有一张小桌子,在小桌子上很多书,两个笔记本和平板电脑。


沙发前有一张小桌子,小桌子上很多书,两个还有笔记本和平板电脑。

一楼有一个厨房,在厨房对面有洗衣房和厕所。


厨房旁边有一个大客厅。


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