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我的微信帐号

‎我第一次想开微信账号的时候,他们说需要一个朋友帮你开账号。我没有朋友,所以不能开。后来再试试好多次。但是不能开。有一天,我试试。我竟然有微信账号了。

‎虽然在微信我只有三个朋友,我用这个账号加入了微信读书。不过微信读书的书太高级了。我看了几本书,我只知道那些书的梗概。很多些时候,我看不懂一些句子,因为他们在表示一些东西。表示东西呢,需要漂漂亮亮的话。

‎我为什么加入微信读书呢?我想读《我的阿勒泰》和《小港人家》。《我的阿勒泰》需要钱买的,但我买不了。所以我会找别的地方读那本书。你有微信读书账号吗?你们可以推荐我可以读的书吗?


When I first wanted to create a WeChat account, they said I needed a friend to help me register. I didn’t have any friends, so I couldn’t do it. Later, I tried several more times but still couldn’t. Then one day, I tried again and surprisingly, I managed to create a WeChat account!

Although I only have three friends on WeChat, I used this account to join WeChat Reading. However, the books on WeChat Reading are quite advanced. I’ve read a few, but I only understand their general ideas. Many times, I don’t understand some sentences because they use figurative or elegant language.

Why did I join WeChat Reading? Because I wanted to read My Altay and Romance in the alley. My Altay needs to be purchased, but I can’t buy it, so I’ll try to find another place to read it. Do you have a WeChat Reading account? Could you recommend me some books to read there?

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我的微信帐号

‎我第一次想开微信账号的时候,他们说需要一个朋友帮你开账号。

我没有朋友,所以不能开。

后来再试好多次。

是不能开。

如果你是初学者,那么最好记住“虽然...但是..."这一关联词形式,也就是说“但是”前一般会有“虽然”。你可以把这句话改成虽然试了好多次,但还是不能开

有一天,我试试。

发现我竟然有微信账号了。

‎虽然在微信只有三个朋友,但我还是用这个账号加入了微信读书。

不过微信读书的书太高级了。

我看了几本书,只知道那些书的梗概。

不知道你是否想写“浏览”这个词

很多些时候,我看不懂一些句子,因为他们在表一些东西思想

东西呢,需要漂漂亮亮的话优美的语言

‎我为什么加入微信读书呢?

我想读《我的阿勒泰》和《小港人家》。

《我的阿勒泰》需要钱买的花钱购买,但我买不了。

所以我会找别的地方读那本书。

你有微信读书账号吗?

你们可以推荐我可以读的书吗?

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我推荐给你巴金的激情三部曲,如果你感兴趣可以自己去看看,他们会调动起你胸腔中头脑里的烈火

我的微信帐号

‎我第一次想注册微信账号的时候,他们说需要一个朋友帮你开账号认证

When I first wanted to create a WeChat account, they said I needed a friend to help me register. I didn’t have any friends, so I couldn’t do it. Later, I tried several more times but still couldn’t. Then one day, I tried again and surprisingly, I managed to create a WeChat account!

Although I only have three friends on WeChat, I used this account to join WeChat Reading. However, the books on WeChat Reading are quite advanced. I’ve read a few, but I only understand their general ideas. Many times, I don’t understand some sentences because they use figurative or elegant language.

Why did I join WeChat Reading? Because I wanted to read My Altay and Romance in the alley. My Altay needs to be purchased, but I can’t buy it, so I’ll try to find another place to read it. Do you have a WeChat Reading account? Could you recommend me some books to read there?

我没有朋友,所以不能开。

后来再试试又试了好多次。

是不能开。

有一天,我又试了试。

我竟然有微信账号了。

‎虽然在微信上,我只有三个朋友,我用这个账号加入了微信读书。

不过微信读书的书太高级了。

我看了几本书,我只知道那些书的梗概。

很多时候,我看不懂一些句子,因为们在表示一描述某些东西。

表示描述东西呢,需要漂漂亮亮用到了一些比喻或修辞的话。

‎我为什么加入微信读书呢?

我想读《我的阿勒泰》和《小港人家》。

《我的阿勒泰》需要钱买的,但我买不了。

所以我会别的地方读那本书。

你有微信读书账号吗?

你们可以推荐我可以读的书吗?

Feedback

推荐老舍和汪曾祺的散文,都浅显易懂又文笔干练优美。篇幅也短小,比较适合你这个阶段的阅读。

还有冰心的《繁星春水》,虽然是诗集,但当时还在白话文的尝试阶段,所以她的诗也是优美的短句。

我的微信帐号

‎我第一次想开微信账号的时候,他们说需要一个朋友帮你开账号。

我没有中国朋友,所以不能开。

后来再试试又试了好多次。

是不能开。

有一天,我试试。了一下,

我竟然有微信账号了。

竟然成功了。

‎虽然在微信我只有三个朋友,我用这个账号加入了微信读书。

不过微信读书的书太高级了。

好像和上文不能形成转折关系,所以去掉了“不过”

我看了几本书,我只知道那些书的梗概。

很多些时候,我看不懂一些句子,因为不知道他们在表示一些东西达什么

一般文学作品、艺术作品、电影电视等离开了创作者的掌控后,面对观众是用“表达”而不是表示。

表示东西呢,需要漂漂亮亮的话。

文学作品呢,需要漂漂亮亮的话。

因为我想读《我的阿勒泰》和《小港人家》。

前面设问了,后面回答需要“因为”承接上下文

《我的阿勒泰》需要钱买的,但我买不了。

所以我会找别的地方读那本书。

你有微信读书账号吗?

你们可以推荐我可以读的书吗?

Feedback

好久没读中文作者的作品了,所以不能推荐。听说阿勒泰是不错的书,加油!

我的微信帐号


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‎我第一次想开微信账号的时候,他们说需要一个朋友帮你开账号。


‎我第一次想开微信账号的时候,他们说需要一个朋友帮你开账号。

‎我第一次想注册微信账号的时候,他们说需要一个朋友帮你开账号认证

When I first wanted to create a WeChat account, they said I needed a friend to help me register. I didn’t have any friends, so I couldn’t do it. Later, I tried several more times but still couldn’t. Then one day, I tried again and surprisingly, I managed to create a WeChat account! Although I only have three friends on WeChat, I used this account to join WeChat Reading. However, the books on WeChat Reading are quite advanced. I’ve read a few, but I only understand their general ideas. Many times, I don’t understand some sentences because they use figurative or elegant language. Why did I join WeChat Reading? Because I wanted to read My Altay and Romance in the alley. My Altay needs to be purchased, but I can’t buy it, so I’ll try to find another place to read it. Do you have a WeChat Reading account? Could you recommend me some books to read there?

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我没有朋友,所以不能开。


我没有中国朋友,所以不能开。

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后来再试试好多次。


后来再试试又试了好多次。

后来再试试又试了好多次。

后来再试好多次。

但是不能开。


是不能开。

是不能开。

是不能开。

如果你是初学者,那么最好记住“虽然...但是..."这一关联词形式,也就是说“但是”前一般会有“虽然”。你可以把这句话改成虽然试了好多次,但还是不能开

有一天,我试试。


有一天,我试试。了一下,

有一天,我又试了试。

有一天,我试试。

我竟然有微信账号了。


我竟然有微信账号了。

竟然成功了。

我竟然有微信账号了。

发现我竟然有微信账号了。


‎虽然在微信我只有三个朋友,我用这个账号加入了微信读书。


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‎虽然在微信上,我只有三个朋友,我用这个账号加入了微信读书。

‎虽然在微信只有三个朋友,但我还是用这个账号加入了微信读书。

不过微信读书的书太高级了。


不过微信读书的书太高级了。

好像和上文不能形成转折关系,所以去掉了“不过”

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不过微信读书的书太高级了。

我看了几本书,我只知道那些书的梗概。


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我看了几本书,只知道那些书的梗概。

不知道你是否想写“浏览”这个词

很多些时候,我看不懂一些句子,因为他们在表示一些东西。


很多些时候,我看不懂一些句子,因为不知道他们在表示一些东西达什么

一般文学作品、艺术作品、电影电视等离开了创作者的掌控后,面对观众是用“表达”而不是表示。

很多时候,我看不懂一些句子,因为们在表示一描述某些东西。

很多些时候,我看不懂一些句子,因为他们在表一些东西思想

表示东西呢,需要漂漂亮亮的话。


表示东西呢,需要漂漂亮亮的话。

文学作品呢,需要漂漂亮亮的话。

表示描述东西呢,需要漂漂亮亮用到了一些比喻或修辞的话。

东西呢,需要漂漂亮亮的话优美的语言


‎我为什么加入微信读书呢?


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我想读《我的阿勒泰》和《小港人家》。


因为我想读《我的阿勒泰》和《小港人家》。

前面设问了,后面回答需要“因为”承接上下文

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《我的阿勒泰》需要钱买的,但我买不了。


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《我的阿勒泰》需要钱买的花钱购买,但我买不了。

所以我会找别的地方读那本书。


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你有微信读书账号吗?


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你们可以推荐我可以读的书吗?


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