Dec. 4, 2021
我每天早上5点起床.
我起床后, 去了我的书房 .
我一边喝咖啡, 一边检查电子邮件,回答人们发给我的问题.
我在美国的一所大学教英语发音
我从 1997 年就有了一个语言网站; 它被很多人使用。 他们有问题时给我写信。
终于退休了,我现在有时间做更多的视频,还有学习中文.
<p>I get up at 5 a.m. every morning.<br>After I get up, I go to my office.<br>While drinking coffee, I check my emails and answer questions people send me.<br>I teach English pronunciation at a university in the United States.<br>I have had a language website since 1997; it is used by many people. They write to me when they have questions.<br>After finally retiring, I have time to make more videos, as well as study Chinese.</p>
我的工作
我每天早上5点起床.
我起床后, 会去了我的书房 .
Here you are describing your daily routine right? So it's better to say you "will" go to the study after getting up.
When you say 我起床后, 去了我的书房, it is just a statement of what happened this morning. You may do something else another day. Hope this is clear :D
我一边喝咖啡, 一边检查电子邮件,回答人们发给我的问题.
我在美国的一所大学教英语发音
我从 1997 年就有了一个语言网站; 它被很多人使用。
他们有问题时给我写信。
现在我终于退休了,我现在有时间做更多的视频,还有学习中文.
Your original sentence reads fine. But we tend to put time and subject at the beginning of a sentence. :))
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Wondering what is your site haha.
我的工作
我每天早上5点起床.
我起床后, 去了会去我的书房 .
我一边喝咖啡, 一边检查电子邮件,回答人们复別人发给我的问题.
我在美国的一所大学教英语发音
我从 1997 年就有了一个语言网站; 它被很多人使用。
他们有问题时会给我写信。
终于退休了,我现在有时间做更多的视频,还有学习中文.
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Could you please tell me the address of your website? I’d like to hang out there.
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