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en1727a

Dec. 12, 2024

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我的寒假

十二月十七日我回家。因为从这里到我住的地方要开车只两个小时,所以我爸爸会接我。我回家的时候,我会马上吃家常菜。因为我一月四日就会学校,所以没有带有很多衣服回家。我觉得很多行李太麻烦了。因为我有很多时间,没有功课, 我打算看书,睡得很好。

我妈妈的生日是十二月二十五日,她住在佛罗里达。虽然我去过弗罗里达多次,但是我对弗罗里达的印象不太好,因为那里有太多的人。有些人不太聪明。但是那个天气比这儿的天气好得多。我跟我哥哥和妹妹一起飞往佛罗里达。我们会不但过我妈妈的生日,而且过圣诞节。虽然我已经花太钱了,但是我会买很多礼物。我会给我妈妈两个礼物。

我妹妹是咖啡师。我听说了她做咖啡做的很好。我想她的咖啡试试。 我妹妹现在工作的咖啡店和我高中的工作的咖啡店是同一家。

下个学期见,寒假快乐!


I return home on December 17th. Because the drive from here to where I live is only two hours, my dad will pick me up. When I return home, the first thing I will do is eat a homecooked meal. Because I return to school early on January 4th, I will not bring a lot of clothes home. I think a lot of luggage is too troublesome. Because I will have a lot of time and no schoolwork, I plan to read books and sleep well.

My mom's birthday is December 25th, she lives in Florida. Although I have been to Florida many times, my impression of Florida is not very good, because there are many people. Some of them are not very smart. But the weather there compared to here is very good. I will fly to Florida with my brother and sister. Wo will not only celebrate my mom's birthday, but also Christmas. Although I have already spent too much money, I will buy many gifts. I will give my mom two gifts.

My sister is a barista. I heard she makes very good coffee. I want to try her coffee. My sister works at the same coffee shop I worked at in high school.

See you next semester, happy winter break!

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我听说了她做咖啡做的很好。

我的寒假

十二月十七日我回家

I return home on December 17th. Because the drive from here to where I live is only two hours, my dad will pick me up. When I return home, the first thing I will do is eat a homecooked meal. Because I return to school early on January 4th, I will not bring a lot of clothes home. I think a lot of luggage is too troublesome. Because I will have a lot of time and no schoolwork, I plan to read books and sleep well.

My mom's birthday is December 25th, she lives in Florida. Although I have been to Florida many times, my impression of Florida is not very good, because there are many people. Some of them are not very smart. But the weather there compared to here is very good. I will fly to Florida with my brother and sister. Wo will not only celebrate my mom's birthday, but also Christmas. Although I have already spent too much money, I will buy many gifts. I will give my mom two gifts.

My sister is a barista. I heard she makes very good coffee. I want to try her coffee. My sister works at the same coffee shop I worked at in high school.

See you next semester, happy winter break!

因为从这里到我住的地方开车只两个小时,所以我爸爸会接我。

回家的时候,我会马上后,我会第一时间吃家常菜。

因为我一月四日就要回学校,所以没有带很多衣服回家。

我觉得很多行李多的话太麻烦了。

因为我有很多时间没有功课, 我打算看书,睡得很好很多好觉

我妈妈的生日是十二月二十五日,她住在佛罗里达。

虽然我去过弗罗里达多次,但是我对弗罗里达的印象不太好,因为那里有太多的人。

有些人不太聪明。

但是那里的天气比这儿的天气好得多。

跟我哥哥和妹妹一起飞往佛罗里达。

我们会不但过不仅会一起给我妈妈生日,而且会一起过圣诞节。

虽然我已经花太钱了,但是我了太多钱,但我还是会买很多礼物。

我会给我妈妈两个礼物。

我妹妹是咖啡师。

我听说她做咖啡做的很好。

我想试试她做的咖啡试试

我妹妹现在工作的咖啡店和我高中工作的咖啡店是同一家。

下个学期见,寒假快乐!

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不错哦,这么一大段的意思都很明白。

加油(ง •_•)ง

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en1727a

Dec. 12, 2024

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谢谢!明天我有一个大考试。你帮我准备了!

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Tammy

Dec. 13, 2024

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不用谢!

祝你考试取得好成绩!

十二月十七日我回家。


十二月十七日我回家

I return home on December 17th. Because the drive from here to where I live is only two hours, my dad will pick me up. When I return home, the first thing I will do is eat a homecooked meal. Because I return to school early on January 4th, I will not bring a lot of clothes home. I think a lot of luggage is too troublesome. Because I will have a lot of time and no schoolwork, I plan to read books and sleep well. My mom's birthday is December 25th, she lives in Florida. Although I have been to Florida many times, my impression of Florida is not very good, because there are many people. Some of them are not very smart. But the weather there compared to here is very good. I will fly to Florida with my brother and sister. Wo will not only celebrate my mom's birthday, but also Christmas. Although I have already spent too much money, I will buy many gifts. I will give my mom two gifts. My sister is a barista. I heard she makes very good coffee. I want to try her coffee. My sister works at the same coffee shop I worked at in high school. See you next semester, happy winter break!

因为从这里到我住的地方要开车只两个小时,所以我爸爸会接我。


因为从这里到我住的地方开车只两个小时,所以我爸爸会接我。

我回家的时候,我会马上吃家常菜。


回家的时候,我会马上后,我会第一时间吃家常菜。

因为我一月四日就会学校,所以没有带有很多衣服回家。


因为我一月四日就要回学校,所以没有带很多衣服回家。

我觉得很多行李太麻烦了。


我觉得很多行李多的话太麻烦了。

我妈妈的生日是十二月二十五日,她住在佛罗里达。


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我会给我妈妈两个礼物。


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我妹妹是咖啡师。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我听说了她做咖啡做的很好。


我听说她做咖啡做的很好。

我听说了她做咖啡做的很好。

我想她的咖啡试试。


我想试试她做的咖啡试试

我妹妹现在工作的咖啡店和我高中的工作的咖啡店是同一家。


我妹妹现在工作的咖啡店和我高中工作的咖啡店是同一家。

下个学期见,寒假快乐!


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我妈妈的生日是十二月二十五日,她住在佛罗里达。


从这里到我住的地方要开车两个小时,所以我爸爸会送我。


我到回家的时候,我会马上吃家常菜。


因为我有很多时间,没有功课, 我打算看书,睡得很好。


因为我有很多时间没有功课, 我打算看书,睡得很好很多好觉

虽然我去过弗罗里达多次,但是我对弗罗里达的印象不太好,因为那里有太多的人。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

有些人不太聪明。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

但是那个天气比这儿的天气好得多。


但是那里的天气比这儿的天气好得多。

我跟我哥哥和妹妹一起飞往佛罗里达。


跟我哥哥和妹妹一起飞往佛罗里达。

我们会不但过我妈妈的生日,而且过圣诞节。


我们会不但过不仅会一起给我妈妈生日,而且会一起过圣诞节。

虽然我已经花太钱了,但是我会买很多礼物。


虽然我已经花太钱了,但是我了太多钱,但我还是会买很多礼物。

我的寒假


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虽然我不回学校才一月四日,但是我会只带少的衣服。


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