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July 23, 2021

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我的寒假

我觉得 11 月和 12 月在哥德堡非常无聊。 没有太阳,几乎每天都下雨,一切都是灰色的。 通常在 1 月第一次下雪。我想太阳。晴天让我真的很开心。 所以我们每年都在 12 月去两周的寒假。 我们坐飞机大加那利岛。 去年有电晕大流行,我们发现不能去那里。 今年我很期待我们的寒假。 我们一到那里,我就感到非常高兴。 我每天都会游,晒日光浴。 我每天都会看书。 我们会打牌,聊天,玩得开心。 我喜欢西班牙食物和牙葡萄酒。 我们会喝西班牙凉菜汤,吃鱼和章鱼,还有兔子。 我们将喝红酒和卡瓦酒。 将会有圣诞节游行和给孩子们的礼物。 我不喜欢瑞典的圣诞节,可是我喜欢在大加那利岛庆祝圣诞节。


I find November and December very boring months in Gothenburg. There is no sun, it rains almost every day, and everything is grey. Snow often comes first in January. I am missing the sun. A sunny day makes me really happy. That is why we every year take two weeks’ vacation in the end of December. We fly to the Gran Canarias. Last year we it was Covid pandemic and we found out that we could not go there. This year I am looking forward our winter vacation. As soon as we get there, I feel very happy. Every day I will swim and take the sunbath. I will read books every day. We will play cards, talk, and have a great time. I like Spanish food and Spanish wine. We will drink gazpacho, eat fish and octopus, and rabbit. We will drink red wine and cava. There will be a Christmas parade and gifts for the children. I do not like Christmas time in Sweden, but I love celebrate Christmas at Gran Canarias.

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我的寒假

我觉得 11 月和 12 月在哥德堡非常无聊。

没有太阳,几乎每天都下雨,一切都是灰色的。

通常在 1 月第一次下雪。

我想太阳。

晴天让我真的很开心。

所以我们每年都在 12 月去两周的寒假期间去两周

我们坐飞机大加那利岛。

去年有电晕大流行,我们发现不能去那里。

What is 电晕?

今年我很期待我们的寒假。

我们一到那里,我就感到非常高兴。

我每天都会游,晒日光浴。

游泳?

我每天都会看书。

我们会打牌,聊天,玩得开心。

我喜欢西班牙食物和葡萄酒。

我们将喝红酒和卡瓦酒。

将会有圣诞节游行和给孩子们的礼物。

我不喜欢瑞典的圣诞节,可是我喜欢在大加那利岛庆祝圣诞节。

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valeriaswe

July 23, 2021

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Dear Jack! Thank you again!

我的寒假


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我觉得 11 月和 12 月在哥德堡非常无聊。


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没有太阳,几乎每天都下雨,一切都是灰色的。


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通常在 1 月第一次下雪。


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我想太阳。


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晴天让我真的很开心。


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所以我们每年都在 12 月去两周的寒假。


所以我们每年都在 12 月去两周的寒假期间去两周

我们坐飞机大加那利岛。


我们坐飞机大加那利岛。

去年有电晕大流行,我们发现不能去那里。


去年有电晕大流行,我们发现不能去那里。

What is 电晕?

今年我很期待我们的寒假。


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我们一到那里,我就感到非常高兴。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我每天都会游,晒日光浴。


我每天都会游,晒日光浴。

游泳?

我每天都会看书。


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我们会打牌,聊天,玩得开心。


我们会打牌,聊天,玩得开心。

我喜欢西班牙食物和牙葡萄酒。


我喜欢西班牙食物和葡萄酒。

我们会喝西班牙凉菜汤,吃鱼和章鱼,还有兔子。


我们将喝红酒和卡瓦酒。


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将会有圣诞节游行和给孩子们的礼物。


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我不喜欢瑞典的圣诞节,可是我喜欢在大加那利岛庆祝圣诞节。


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