Jan. 19, 2024
我的习惯。
我有很多习惯。
我每晚洗澡。因为我不想要是弄脏睡觉，我总是记得洗澡。
我每晚刷牙。以前，我有时忘记刷牙，但是现在我总是洗澡的时候刷牙。这是有力的办法。如果你已经有好的习惯，就你能干它们一起跟新的习惯。
我三次每个星期运动。我过去不想要去锻炼身体。现在我跟朋友运动。我想要运动因为我想要看见我的朋友。这也是好的办法坚持习惯。
I have many habits.
I shower every night. Because I don't want to go to sleep dirty, I always remember to shower.
I brush my teeth every night. Before, I would sometimes forget to brush my teeth, but now I always brush my teeth in the shower. This is a powerful method. If you already have good habits, then you can do them together with new ones.
I exercise three times a week. In the past I didn't want to exercise. Now I exercise with my friends. I want to exercise because I want to see my friends. This is also another good way to stick with your habits.
我的习惯。
我有很多习惯。
我每晚洗澡。
因为我不想要是弄脏睡觉，（？），所以我总是记得洗澡。
The second half of the sentence doesn't have any major mistakes, and adding a “所以” here can make the sentence more coherent.In addition, I'm really sorry to say that. But, to be honest, I can't really understand the exact meaning of the first half of this sentence...
我每晚刷牙。
以前，我有时忘记刷牙，但是现在我总是在洗澡的时候刷牙。
“在……时候”means "when ...". Without “”
这是有力个有效的办法。
“有力的”means "(opinions) forceful", maybe use “有效的”, which means effective, here can be better.
如果你已经有好的习惯，就你就能干它们一起跟新的习惯。
There aren't any mistakes in the first half of this sentence. In its latter half, “就”should be used behind the subject “我”. And I can't quite understand the meaning of the part behind “就”.
¶我每个星期运动三次。
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我三次
Pay attention to the word order.
我过去不想要去锻炼身体。
This sentence has no mistake, but I really feel strange when I read it. You can leave either “要”or “去” here, or maybe neither.
现在我跟朋友运动。
我想要运动因为我想要看见我的朋友。
“看见”means "see (use eyes)", but it don't has as many meanings as the word "see" has. so the sentence you wrote just means "I want to see my friends"(Maybe don't have ability to see anything)
这也是好的办法坚持习惯的好的办法。
Pay attention to the word order.
Jan. 25, 2024
谢谢你的复习！I'll try to learn from this.
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我有很多习惯。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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我每晚洗澡。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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因为我不想要是弄脏睡觉，我总是记得洗澡。 因为我不想要是弄脏睡觉 The second half of the sentence doesn't have any major mistakes, and adding a “所以” here can make the sentence more coherent.In addition, I'm really sorry to say that. But, to be honest, I can't really understand the exact meaning of the first half of this sentence... |
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我每晚刷牙。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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以前，我有时忘记刷牙，但是现在我总是洗澡的时候刷牙。 以前，我有时忘记刷牙，但是现在我总是在洗澡的时候刷牙。 “在……时候”means "when ...". Without “” |
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这是有力的办法。 这是 “有力的”means "(opinions) forceful", maybe use “有效的”, which means effective, here can be better. |
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如果你已经有好的习惯，就你能干它们一起跟新的习惯。 如果你已经有好的习惯， There aren't any mistakes in the first half of this sentence. In its latter half, “就”should be used behind the subject “我”. And I can't quite understand the meaning of the part behind “就”. |
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我三次每个星期运动。
Pay attention to the word order.
每星期我会运动三次。 |
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我过去不想要去锻炼身体。 我过去不想 This sentence has no mistake, but I really feel strange when I read it. You can leave either “要”or “去” here, or maybe neither. 我过去不想要去锻炼身体。 我过去不怎么想去锻炼身体。 |
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现在我跟朋友运动。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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我想要运动因为我想要看见我的朋友。 我想要运动因为我想要看见我的朋友。 “看见”means "see (use eyes)", but it don't has as many meanings as the word "see" has. so the sentence you wrote just means "I want to see my friends"(Maybe don't have ability to see anything) |
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这也是好的办法坚持习惯。 这也是 Pay attention to the word order. |
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