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dgunay

Jan. 17, 2024

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我的不好天在工作

今天我起晚了。我每晚应该至少七个小时但是就五个小时睡觉了。我感觉很不舒服了。我还是工作了八个小时 但是我没去每天的会议。


Today I got up late. I need at least 7 hours a night but only slept for 5 hours. I felt very uncomfortable. I still worked 8 hours but I missed my daily meeting.

Corrections

我的不好天在工作工作不顺的一天¶

I don't know if my correction is what you meant, but I think it's better.

今天我起晚了。

我每晚应该至少七个至少需要睡七小时但是就五个小时睡觉了。昨晚只睡五个钟头。¶

感觉很不舒服

我还是工作了八个小时 但是我没去每天的会议。
I need at least 7 hours a night but only slept for 5 hours. I felt very uncomfortable. I still worked 8 hours but I missed my daily meeting.¶

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Simple but true. I like it.

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dgunay

Jan. 18, 2024

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For the title, I meant to say something like "my bad day at work". Thanks for the feedback.

我的不好天在工作


我的不好天在工作工作不顺的一天¶

I don't know if my correction is what you meant, but I think it's better.

今天我起晚了。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我每晚应该至少七个小时但是就五个小时睡觉了。


我每晚应该至少七个至少需要睡七小时但是就五个小时睡觉了。昨晚只睡五个钟头。¶

我感觉很不舒服了。


感觉很不舒服

我还是工作了八个小时 但是我没去每天的会议。


我还是工作了八个小时 但是我没去每天的会议。
I need at least 7 hours a night but only slept for 5 hours. I felt very uncomfortable. I still worked 8 hours but I missed my daily meeting.¶

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