May 26, 2024
我的一天
我是玛丽。 我今年十八岁。 我每天早上六点起床、六点半吃早饭。 差一刻七点去教室、七点上课。差一刻十点下课。中午我回房间做饭、做饭以后，吃午饭。午饭以后、我常在房间休息休息。下午两点、我常跟朋友去玩。下午五点我在房间洗澡、洗衣服。七点吃晚饭。晚上我常做练习、预习课文和生词。十一点睡觉。
我的一天
我是叫玛丽。
我今年十八岁。
我每天早上六点起床、六点半吃早饭。
差一刻七点去教室、七点上课。
差一刻十点下课。
中午我回房间做饭、做完饭以后，吃午饭。
午饭以后、，我常在房间休息休息。
下午两点、我常跟朋友去玩。
下午五点我在回房间洗澡、洗衣服。
七点吃晚饭。
晚上我常做练习、预习课文和生词。
十一点睡觉。
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寫得很好！
我的一天
我是玛丽。
我今年十八岁。
我每天早上六点起床、六点半吃早饭。
差一刻七点去十五分钟后教室、七点上课。
差一刻十点下课。
中午我回房间做饭、做饭以后，吃午饭。
午饭以后、我常在房间休息休息。
下午两点、我常跟朋友去玩。
下午五点我在房间洗澡、洗衣服。
七点吃晚饭。
晚上我常做练习、预习课文和生词。
十一点睡觉。
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你的一天很充实!
我的一天
我是玛丽。
我今年十八岁。
我每天早上六点起床、六点半吃早饭。
差一刻七点六点四十五分去教室、七点上课。
差一刻十点九点四十五分下课。
中午我回房间做饭、做饭以后，之后吃午饭。
午饭以后、我常在房间休息稍作休息。
下午两点、我常跟朋友去玩。
下午五点我在房间洗澡、洗衣服。
七点吃晚饭。
晚上我常做练习、预习课文和生词。
十一点睡觉。
我的一天
我是玛丽。，
我今年十八岁。
我每天早上六点起床、，六点半吃早饭。
连接句子要用逗号“，”
差一刻七点六点四十五分去教室、，七点上课。
可以说“七点一刻”，但没有“差一刻七点”
差一刻十点九点四十五分下课。
中午我回房间做饭、做。做完饭以后，吃午饭。
午饭以后、我常，我一般在房间休息休息。
下午两点、我常，我一般跟朋友去玩。
下午五点我在房间洗澡、洗衣服。
这里是连接短语，所以可以用顿号“、”
七点吃晚饭。
晚上我常做练习、预习课文和学习生词。
十一点睡觉。
我的一天
我是玛丽。，
我今年十八岁。
我每天早上六点起床、，六点半吃早饭。，
差一刻七点去教室、六点四十五分去教室，然后七点上课。
中文里表达几点几分，就是几点几分，很少有“差几分几点”的说法。
差一刻十点9点45分下课。
也可以直接用阿拉伯数字，这样跟前边的上课时间一起，读者马上就知道你的上课时间总共2小时45分钟了。
中午我回房间做饭、做饭以后，，然后吃午饭。
午饭以后、我常，我会在房间休息休息。
下午两点、，我常跟朋友一起去玩。
下午五点我在房间洗澡、洗衣服。
七点吃晚饭。
晚上我常一般做练习、，预习课文和生词。
十一点睡觉。
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差一刻七点去教室、七点上课。
中文里表达几点几分，就是几点几分，很少有“差几分几点”的说法。
可以说“七点一刻”，但没有“差一刻七点”
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差一刻十点下课。
也可以直接用阿拉伯数字，这样跟前边的上课时间一起，读者马上就知道你的上课时间总共2小时45分钟了。
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