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andylosdos

Oct. 3, 2021

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我是谁

你好。我的名字是Andy。我住在上海。我和我的女朋友住在上海已经三年了。我有一个哥哥和一个妹妹。我的哥哥叫David,我的妹妹叫Catherine。我还有父母。我的爸爸叫Martin,我的妈妈叫Mary。他们都住在英国但是我住在中国。

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我是谁

你好。

我的名字是Andy。

我是Andy
我的名字叫Andy

我住在上海。

我和我的女朋友住在上海已经三年了。

我有一个哥哥和一个妹妹。

我的哥哥叫David,我的妹妹叫Catherine。

我还有父母。

我的爸爸叫Martin,我的妈妈叫Mary。

他们都住在英国但是我住在中国。

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Jack

Oct. 3, 2021

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Change your Chinese level to B2.

我是谁

你好。

我的名字是Andy。

我住在上海。

我和我的女朋友住在上海已经三年了。

我有一个哥哥和一个妹妹。

我的哥哥叫David,我的妹妹叫Catherine。

我还有父母。

我的爸爸叫Martin,我的妈妈叫Mary。

他们都住在英国但是我住在中国。

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你好!我的名字是Andy。我和我的女朋友已经住在上海三年了。而我的父母住在英国,爸爸叫Martin,妈妈叫Mary。我还有一个哥哥和一个妹妹,哥哥叫David,妹妹叫Catherine。

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你好。


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我的名字是Andy。


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我的名字是Andy。

我是Andy 我的名字叫Andy

我住在上海。


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我和我的女朋友住在上海已经三年了。


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我有一个哥哥和一个妹妹。


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我的哥哥叫David,我的妹妹叫Catherine。


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我还有父母。


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我的爸爸叫Martin,我的妈妈叫Mary。


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他们都住在英国但是我住在中国。


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