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randomwriter123456

Jan. 1, 2025

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我做了什么上班——

我小和去学校的时候,我平走路因为学校离家进。我去大学的时候,我能做公交车和骑自行车。如果天晴天我就骑了自行车,可是骑自行车以后我要洗澡. 如果天有雨雪很冷,我喜欢坐公交车。公交车里我能看本书。
今天我是老师,我走路去学校。上个年我去别学校离家远,可以我开车我车上班。我早上很累的时候我喝咖啡和我下班的时候我是在我车睡觉的以前回家。我不喜欢住哪里离共做元。


When I went to school, I went on foot because it was near my home. When I went to university, I could go by bus or bicycle. If it was a good day, I rode a bike, but sometimes, after I rode it, I only wanted to shower. I would instead go by bus if it were raining, snowing, or cold. When I took the bus, I could read a book.
Nowadays, I'm a teacher and walk to school. Some years ago, I worked in other schools and had to drive to get there because they were far from home. If I was tired, I drank coffee, and when I finished my shift, I took a nap in my car before I drove home. I do not like to live far from my job.

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做了什么上班——

我小和去学校的时候,我平走路小时候我走路上学,因为学校离家

When I went to school, I went on foot because it was near my home. When I went to university, I could go by bus or bicycle. If it was a good day, I rode a bike, but sometimes, after I rode it, I only wanted to shower. I would instead go by bus if it were raining, snowing, or cold. When I took the bus, I could read a book.
Nowadays, I'm a teacher and walk to school. Some years ago, I worked in other schools and had to drive to get there because they were far from home. If I was tired, I drank coffee, and when I finished my shift, I took a nap in my car before I drove home. I do not like to live far from my job.

我去大学的时候,我能公交车和骑自行车。

如果天晴我就骑自行车,可是骑自行车以后我要洗澡. 如果天有雨雪很冷,我喜欢坐公交车。

公交车里我能看本书。


今天
如今我是老师,我走路去学校。

上个年我去别学校离家远,可以我开车我车上班。

早上很累的时候,我会喝咖啡我下班的时候我是在我车睡觉的以前会在车里打个盹,再回家。

我不喜欢住哪里离共做元得离单位太远

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randomwriter123456

Jan. 2, 2025

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Thank you very much for your time!

上个年我去别学校离家远,可以我开车我车上班几年前我在别的学校上班,因为离家远所以我必须开车去

如果我早上很累的时候我,我会喝咖啡,当我下班的时候我是在我车睡觉的以前会打个盹,然后开车回家。

我不喜欢住哪里离共做元的地方离工作地方太远

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randomwriter123456

Jan. 2, 2025

1

Thank you for your time. I didn't know some words such as 几年, and now I'm excited to learn them this way.

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做了什么上班——用什么交通方式去上班

我小和去学校的时候,我平学的时候去学校,我通常都是走路因为学校离家

我去大学的时候,我能做可以坐公交车和骑自行车。

如果晴天我就骑了自行车,可是骑自行车以后我要洗澡. 如果天有雨雪是下雨或者下雪天很冷,我喜欢坐公交车。

公交车里我能看书。


今天
如今我是老师,我都是走路去学校。

上个年我去别去年我在别的学校离家远,以我开车我可以开我的车上班。

我早上很累的时候我喝咖啡我下班的时候我是在我车睡觉的以前回家。

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Tsuki

Jan. 1, 2025

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补充:“ 我早上很累的时候我喝咖啡和我下班的时候我是在我车睡觉的以前回家。”→“如果早上很累的时候我会喝杯咖啡,在开车前我会在车里打个盹。我不喜欢离家太远的工作。”

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randomwriter123456

Jan. 2, 2025

1

Thank you very much for your time!
I just have a question from the last sentence. I studied that 会 means future or to know to do something, but are there any meanings?

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Tsuki

Jan. 2, 2025

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会 means"future(机会)","will to do(将会)","consultation/group consultation(会合)",and“understand(领会)”"chance(机会)","can(学会)"

我做了什么上班——


做了什么上班——用什么交通方式去上班

做了什么上班——

我小和去学校的时候,我平走路因为学校离家进。


我小和去学校的时候,我平学的时候去学校,我通常都是走路因为学校离家

我小和去学校的时候,我平走路小时候我走路上学,因为学校离家

When I went to school, I went on foot because it was near my home. When I went to university, I could go by bus or bicycle. If it was a good day, I rode a bike, but sometimes, after I rode it, I only wanted to shower. I would instead go by bus if it were raining, snowing, or cold. When I took the bus, I could read a book. Nowadays, I'm a teacher and walk to school. Some years ago, I worked in other schools and had to drive to get there because they were far from home. If I was tired, I drank coffee, and when I finished my shift, I took a nap in my car before I drove home. I do not like to live far from my job.

我去大学的时候,我能做公交车和骑自行车。


我去大学的时候,我能做可以坐公交车和骑自行车。

我去大学的时候,我能公交车和骑自行车。

如果天晴天我就骑了自行车,可是骑自行车以后我要洗澡. 如果天有雨雪很冷,我喜欢坐公交车。


如果晴天我就骑了自行车,可是骑自行车以后我要洗澡. 如果天有雨雪是下雨或者下雪天很冷,我喜欢坐公交车。

如果天晴我就骑自行车,可是骑自行车以后我要洗澡. 如果天有雨雪很冷,我喜欢坐公交车。

公交车里我能看本书。


公交车里我能看书。

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今天我是老师,我走路去学校。



今天
如今我是老师,我都是走路去学校。


今天
如今我是老师,我走路去学校。

上个年我去别学校离家远,可以我开车我车上班。


上个年我去别去年我在别的学校离家远,以我开车我可以开我的车上班。

上个年我去别学校离家远,可以我开车我车上班几年前我在别的学校上班,因为离家远所以我必须开车去

上个年我去别学校离家远,可以我开车我车上班。

我早上很累的时候我喝咖啡和我下班的时候我是在我车睡觉的以前回家。


我早上很累的时候我喝咖啡我下班的时候我是在我车睡觉的以前回家。

如果我早上很累的时候我,我会喝咖啡,当我下班的时候我是在我车睡觉的以前会打个盹,然后开车回家。

早上很累的时候,我会喝咖啡我下班的时候我是在我车睡觉的以前会在车里打个盹,再回家。

我不喜欢住哪里离共做元。


我不喜欢住哪里离共做元的地方离工作地方太远

我不喜欢住哪里离共做元得离单位太远

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