June 25, 2025
大家好, 我是李。
2022 年我毕业了。
我的专业是中文。
毕业后,那时候我跟自己说话 ”我毕业后,即使我不能住在中国,还是留学,每天也还要继续学中文。"
三年后,我还没得到这个目标。
感觉我的中文水平渐渐地降低了。
以前,我有朋友会说中文,但是因为疫情他们回国了所以没有那么多机会跟别人联系说中文。
所以,今天是第一次我来用lang correct,希望帮助的人可以纠正我写的句子。
谢谢大家。
Hello everybody, I am Lee.
I graduated in 2022.
My major was Chinese.
After graduating, I told myself "After I graduate, even though I cannot live in China, or study abroad, I will continue to study Chinese every day."
3 years later and I still have not achieved this goal.
I feel that my Chinese level is slowly declining.
Before, I had friends that could speak Chinese, but because of the pandemic, they returned home and I didn't have that many opportunities to continue practicing to speak Chinese.
So, today is the first time I am using Lang Correct and I hope that helpful people can correct my sentences.
Thank you everybody.
¶我是2022 年我毕业了的。
¶毕业后,那时候我跟自己说话 ”我对自己说:我毕业后,即使我不能住在中国,还是或者留学,每天也还要继续学中文。
"
¶三年过去了,我没实现这个目标。
三年后,我还没得到
¶以前,我有朋友周围有会说中文的朋友,但是因为疫情他们回国了,所以没有那么多机会跟和别人联系说中文练习中文会话。
¶今天是我第一次
所以,我来用lang correct,希望帮助的人可以大家可以帮忙纠正我写的句子。
我今天要写的题目:继续学习中文
挺好,但尽量在题目简单化,细节可以后补充
大家好, 我是李。
¶我毕业于2022年。
2022 年我毕业了
中文语句习惯是重要信息放句尾
我的专业是中文。
¶毕业时,我和自己说 , “即使我不能住在中国,也不能继续在那里留学,我还是要每天学中文。”
毕业后,那时候我跟自己说话 ”我毕业后,即使我不能住在中国,还是留学,每天也还要继续
说话有对话的意思,communicate,所以直接用“说”即可。引用得有先一撇,“,”,“还是留学”意思不清楚,可能你想要的答案是“也不能在那里继续留学”。”“毕业后”是continous的时间段,你做出决定是当下,所以得用“毕业时”,“还要继续学中文”也是同样的道理。
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¶
三年后,我还没得到这个目标。
自此已经三年,但我还是没有完成这个目标。
感觉我的中文水平渐渐地降低了。
¶以前,我有一个朋友会说中文,但是因为疫情他们回国了。所以现在没有那么多机会跟别人联系说中文。
还可以。句子不用那么长
¶今天是第一次我来用lang correct,希望帮助的人可以纠正我写的句子。
所以,
不用太多连接词
谢谢大家。
我今天要写的题目:继续学习中文
大家好, 我是李。
¶我在2022 年我毕业了。,
虽然修改前后的句子是一个意思且都正确,但考虑到上下文的连贯,建议如上。
¶主修专业是中文。
我的
¶毕业后,那时候我跟自己说话 ”我:“毕业后,即使我不能住在中国,还或是留学,每天也还要继续学中文。”
Hello everybody, I am Lee.
I graduated in 2022.
My major was Chinese.
After graduating, I told myself "After I graduate, even though I cannot live in China, or study abroad, I will continue to study Chinese every day."
3 years later and I still have not achieved this goal.
I feel that my Chinese level is slowly declining.
Before, I had friends that could speak Chinese, but because of the pandemic, they returned home and I didn't have that many opportunities to continue practicing to speak Chinese.
So, today is the first time I am using Lang Correct and I hope that helpful people can correct my sentences.
Thank you everybody.
"
¶
三年后,我还没得没能达到这个目标。
感觉我的中文水平渐渐地降低了。
¶以前,我有朋友会说中文,但是因为疫情他们回国了,所以没有那么多机会跟别人联系练习说中文。
¶所以,今天是第一次我来用lang correct,希望帮助的有人可以帮忙纠正我写的句子。
谢谢大家。
我今天要写的题目:继续学习中文
大家好, 我是李。
¶2022 年我毕业了。
我在2022年毕业了。/我毕业于2022年。
我的专业是中文。
¶毕业时我对/跟自己说
毕业后,那时候我话 ”:“我毕业后,即使我不能住在中国,还是或者去留学,每天也还要继续学中文。”
1. You cannot both say 毕业后and 那时候, as 毕业后usually is not a proper time point.
2. When you describe a speaking behavior following a specific speaking sentence, you should not use 说话 but only 说。
3. To quote a specific sentence you are speaking, about the punctuation, you should add a :, then quote the sentences using “ ”
4. Using 或者 as “or”
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¶三年后,我还没得达到这个目标。
得到means receive/get. 达到means reach.
¶感觉我的中文水平逐渐渐地降低了。
¶以前,我有朋友会说中文,但是因为疫情他们回国了,所以后来没有那么多机会跟别人联系说中文。
联系is not a very common word when we want to say speaking with someone. It’s more like connect, a behavior. Eg. If you want to say you haven’t connected with a friend for a long time, you can say, 我好久没和他联系了。
¶所以,今天是我第一次我来用lang correct,希望帮助的有人可以帮忙纠正我写的句子。
We usually put personal pronoun at very beginning of a sentence. I didn’t study in detailed for this part grammar, but it just like this :(
谢谢大家。
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非常好的语法!我也是第一次使用langcorrect,希望能帮到你,祝学习顺利!
我今天要写的题目:继续学习中文 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! 我今天要写的题目: 挺好,但尽量在题目简单化,细节可以后补充 |
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2022 年我毕业了。
虽然修改前后的句子是一个意思且都正确,但考虑到上下文的连贯,建议如上。
我在2022年毕业了。/我毕业于2022年。
中文语句习惯是重要信息放句尾
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我的专业是中文。
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毕业后,那时候我跟自己说话 ”我毕业后,即使我不能住在中国,还是留学,每天也还要继续学中文。
1. You cannot both say 毕业后and 那时候, as 毕业后usually is not a proper time point. 2. When you describe a speaking behavior following a specific speaking sentence, you should not use 说话 but only 说。 3. To quote a specific sentence you are speaking, about the punctuation, you should add a :, then quote the sentences using “ ” 4. Using 或者 as “or”
Hello everybody, I am Lee. I graduated in 2022. My major was Chinese. After graduating, I told myself "After I graduate, even though I cannot live in China, or study abroad, I will continue to study Chinese every day." 3 years later and I still have not achieved this goal. I feel that my Chinese level is slowly declining. Before, I had friends that could speak Chinese, but because of the pandemic, they returned home and I didn't have that many opportunities to continue practicing to speak Chinese. So, today is the first time I am using Lang Correct and I hope that helpful people can correct my sentences. Thank you everybody.
说话有对话的意思,communicate,所以直接用“说”即可。引用得有先一撇,“,”,“还是留学”意思不清楚,可能你想要的答案是“也不能在那里继续留学”。”“毕业后”是continous的时间段,你做出决定是当下,所以得用“毕业时”,“还要继续学中文”也是同样的道理。
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" 三年后,我还没得到这个目标。
得到means receive/get. 达到means reach.
" 自此已经三年,但我还是没有完成这个目标。
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感觉我的中文水平渐渐地降低了。
This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
以前,我有朋友会说中文,但是因为疫情他们回国了所以没有那么多机会跟别人联系说中文。
联系is not a very common word when we want to say speaking with someone. It’s more like connect, a behavior. Eg. If you want to say you haven’t connected with a friend for a long time, you can say, 我好久没和他联系了。
还可以。句子不用那么长
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所以,今天是第一次我来用lang correct,希望帮助的人可以纠正我写的句子。
We usually put personal pronoun at very beginning of a sentence. I didn’t study in detailed for this part grammar, but it just like this :(
不用太多连接词
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谢谢大家。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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