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bea

May 17, 2025

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啊, Peter, 是你呀!
啊, 潘多, 你好, 你好!
你也来Bochum做什么?
我来学中文。
你在哪儿学习?
在Sinicum. 诶呦,八点吧! 我得去上课了。
你几点上课?
八点半。
那么, 中午你有空么?
有空。我们在Sinicum十二点见面,好吗?
好。
再见👋!
再见👋!

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啊, Peter, 是你呀!

啊, 潘多, 你好, 你好!


你也
来Bochum做什么?

这里用“也”会有点奇怪。如果想强调二人都在可以把整句话改成“你为什么也在Bochum呢?”

我来学中文。

你在哪儿学习?


在Sinicum. 诶呦,八点! 我得去上课了。

“了”表示已经时间已经是八点,要赶去上课。

你几点上课?

八点半。


那么,
中午你有空么?

本身这句话是没有问题的。这样子会更口语化一些。

我们在Sinicum十二点见面,好,可以吗?

“好吗”不太自然但是可以理解,“可以吗”会自然一些。

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写得特别好!
已经很完美啦,都是一些很小很小的问题。ദ്ദി(。•,<)~✩‧₊
希望有帮助到你!(˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶)

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bea

May 18, 2025

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谢谢你的帮助!

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啊, Peter, 是你呀!

啊, 潘多, 你好, 你好!

你也来Bochum做什么?

我来学中文。

你在哪儿学习?

在Sinicum. 诶呦,八点吧! 我得去上课了。

你几点上课?

八点半。

那么, 中午你有空么?

有空。

我们在Sinicum十二点见面,好吗?

好。

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bea

May 17, 2025

22

谢谢你!

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啊, Peter, 是你呀!


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啊, 潘多, 你好, 你好!


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你也来Bochum做什么?


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你也
来Bochum做什么?

这里用“也”会有点奇怪。如果想强调二人都在可以把整句话改成“你为什么也在Bochum呢?”

我来学中文。


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你在哪儿学习?


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在Sinicum. 诶呦,八点吧! 我得去上课了。


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在Sinicum. 诶呦,八点! 我得去上课了。

“了”表示已经时间已经是八点,要赶去上课。

你几点上课?


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八点半。


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那么, 中午你有空么?


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那么,
中午你有空么?

本身这句话是没有问题的。这样子会更口语化一些。

有空。


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我们在Sinicum十二点见面,好吗?


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我们在Sinicum十二点见面,好,可以吗?

“好吗”不太自然但是可以理解,“可以吗”会自然一些。

好。


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