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愿望清单上的城市:西安

我今天想开始写一个系列关于有一天对我感兴趣的城市。今天的写子非是西安莫属。
这座城市由于兵马俑很有名。当然这也是我想去的原因之一。我喜欢老东西,那我很希望我机会亲眼看。
在西安,还有古代的长,那也有意思。西安的菜我也听说很好吃。这是大致我最强大的愿意去旅行,那我很感兴趣吃西安的美食。


Cities on my bucket list - Xi'an

Today I thought I would start writing a series about cities I'd like to visit. Today's entry is none other than Xi'an.
This city is very famous for the terracotta warriors. Of course, they are also one of the reasons I would like to go.
I like old stuff, so I'd love the chance to see them one day.
In Xi'an, there is also an ancient wall, which is cool too. I've heard Xi'an has good food. That's probably the biggest reason I travel anywhere, so I'm interested to go eat the good food there.

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愿望清单上的城市:西安

今天想开始写一个系列关于有一天对我感兴趣我要去的城市。

Cities on my bucket list - Xi'an

Today I thought I would start writing a series about cities I'd like to visit. Today's entry is none other than Xi'an.
This city is very famous for the terracotta warriors. Of course, they are also one of the reasons I would like to go.
I like old stuff, so I'd love the chance to see them one day.
In Xi'an, there is also an ancient wall, which is cool too. I've heard Xi'an has good food. That's probably the biggest reason I travel anywhere, so I'm interested to go eat the good food there.

今天的写子非是内容非西安莫属。

非...莫属,固定的结构。


这座城市由于因为兵马俑很有名。

当然这也是我想去的原因之一。

我喜欢古老的东西,那我很希望我机会亲眼看。

老东西,虽然也有你想表达的那个意思,但是一般几十年前的东西就可以叫老东西了。对于千百年前的,得用到“古老”。


在西安,还有古代的城墙,那也有意思。

西安的菜我也听说很好吃。

这是大致我最强大的愿意去旅行,那我很感兴趣概是促使我去旅行的最强意愿了,所以我对吃西安的美食很感兴趣

这是大致我最强大的愿意去旅行,那我很感兴趣吃西安的美食。


这是大致我最强大的愿意去旅行,那我很感兴趣概是促使我去旅行的最强意愿了,所以我对吃西安的美食很感兴趣

愿望清单上的城市:西安


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我今天想开始写一个系列关于有一天对我感兴趣的城市。


今天想开始写一个系列关于有一天对我感兴趣我要去的城市。

Cities on my bucket list - Xi'an Today I thought I would start writing a series about cities I'd like to visit. Today's entry is none other than Xi'an. This city is very famous for the terracotta warriors. Of course, they are also one of the reasons I would like to go. I like old stuff, so I'd love the chance to see them one day. In Xi'an, there is also an ancient wall, which is cool too. I've heard Xi'an has good food. That's probably the biggest reason I travel anywhere, so I'm interested to go eat the good food there.

今天的写子非是西安莫属。


今天的写子非是内容非西安莫属。

非...莫属,固定的结构。

这座城市由于兵马俑很有名。



这座城市由于因为兵马俑很有名。

当然这也是我想去的原因之一。


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我喜欢老东西,那我很希望我机会亲眼看。


我喜欢古老的东西,那我很希望我机会亲眼看。

老东西,虽然也有你想表达的那个意思,但是一般几十年前的东西就可以叫老东西了。对于千百年前的,得用到“古老”。

在西安,还有古代的长,那也有意思。



在西安,还有古代的城墙,那也有意思。

西安的菜我也听说很好吃。


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