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April 15, 2024

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《愿望》:关于雪花的想法

婷:(凝视着诗) 这首诗让你想到什么了吗?

敏: (摘下耳机) 抱歉! 你说了什么?我在听一个关于后现代哲学的播客。

礼弥: 这首诗读起来是不是有点像作者想消失不见?对我来说,它就像是对遗忘的赞歌。

提姆:(摇着头) 多么懦弱!每个人都应该肯定自己的生命并庆祝上帝的创造。

敏:(讽刺地大笑)胡说八道。当我们谈论时,雪花在融化。

总结: 关于短暂、肯定和否定的思考。
关键词: 雪花、短暂、无常、虚荣、刹那、自我否定、寂静


Wish: A Snowflake Contemplation

I wish I were a snowflake
floating from the sky,
gently kissing the earth,
then melting in the sunshine.

Maya: (gazing at the poem) Does this say anything to you?

Raúl: (removing some earphones from his ears) Sorry!
Did you say anything?
I was listening to a podcast on post-modern philosophy.

Tara: Doesn't it almost seem as if author wishes to disappear?
To me, it's a paen to oblivion.

José: (shaking his head) How wimpy!
Each person should affirm their life and celebrate God's creation.

Raúl: (laughing cynically) Blah, blah, blah.
While we talk, snowflakes melt.

SUMMARY: Some thoughts on ephemerality, affirmation, and negation.
KEYWORDS: snowflakes, ephemerality, transience, vanitas, ictu oculi, self-negation, quietus

雪花、短暂、无常
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《愿望》:关于雪花的想法

婷:(凝视着诗) 这首诗让你想到什么了吗?

敏: (摘下耳机) 抱歉!

你说了什么?

我在听一个关于后现代哲学的播客。

礼弥: 这首诗读起来是不是有点像作者想消失不见?

对我来说,它就像是对遗忘的赞歌。

提姆:(摇着头) 多么懦弱!

每个人都应该肯定自己的生命并庆祝上帝的创造。

敏:(讽刺地大笑)胡说八道。

当我们谈论时,雪花在融化。

总结: 关于短暂、肯定和否定的思考。

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你的这段文字让我觉得你已经掌握了中文!!!好棒!!!继续加油!!!

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TNewfields

April 16, 2024

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说实话,我有时很懒。我学了 20 年中文,但进步不大。

婷:(凝视着诗) 这首诗让你想到什么了吗?

敏: (摘下耳机) 抱歉!

你说什么?

在听一个关于后现代哲学的播客。

我在听...= I'm listening...;
我刚在听...= I was listening...



礼弥: 这首诗读起来是不是有点像
那种作者想消失不见的感觉

对我来说,它就像是对遗忘的赞歌。

提姆:(摇着头) 多么懦弱!

每个人都应该肯定自己的生命并庆祝上帝的创造。

敏:(讽刺地大笑)胡说八道。

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我觉得像是在说积极与消极的思考啊。

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TNewfields

April 16, 2024

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感谢您的指正。我还是会犯很多基本错误。

《愿望》:关于雪花的想法

婷:(凝视着诗) 这首诗让你想到什么了吗?

敏: (摘下耳机) 抱歉!

你说了什么?

我在听一个关于后现代哲学的播客。

礼弥: 这首诗读起来是不是有点像作者想消失不见?

对我来说,它就像是对遗忘的赞歌。

提姆:(摇着头) 多么懦弱!

每个人都应该肯定自己的生命并庆祝上帝的创造。

敏:(讽刺地大笑)胡说八道。

当我们谈论时,雪花在融化。

总结: 关于短暂、肯定和否定的思考。

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提姆:(摇着头) 多么懦弱!


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每个人都应该肯定自己的生命并庆祝上帝的创造。


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