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bea

May 19, 2025

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当老师好吗?

小明:你觉得当老师好吗?
小红:很好, 老师可以很跟孩子玩。
小明:我觉得当老师不太好。
小红:为什么?
小明:因为当老师要讲课, 还要改作业, 很累, 我觉得当老师不太好。
小红:话是这么说, 我还是😍喜欢当老师。

当老师
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当老师好吗?

小明:你觉得当老师好吗?


小红:很好, 老师可以很跟孩子玩。

原本的也正确,修正后更自然。

小明:我觉得当老师不太好。

小红:为什么?


小明:因为当老师要讲课, 还要改作业, 很累, 所以我觉得当老师不太好。

原本的也正确,修正后更自然。


小红:话是这么说, 我还是😍喜欢当老师。

原本的也正确,修正后更自然。

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bea

May 19, 2025

22

谢谢你的帮助!

当老师好吗?

小明:你觉得当老师好吗?


小红:很好, 老师可以跟孩子玩。

小明:我觉得当老师不太好。

小红:为什么?

小明:因为当老师要讲课, 还要改作业, 很累, 我觉得当老师不太好。

小红:话是这么说, 我还是😍喜欢当老师。

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bea

May 19, 2025

22

谢谢你!

当老师好吗?

小明:你觉得当老师好吗?

小红:很好, 老师可以很跟孩子玩。

小明:我觉得当老师不太好。

小红:为什么?

小明:因为当老师要讲课, 还要改作业, 很累, 我觉得当老师不太好。

小红:话是这么说, 我还是😍喜欢当老师。

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bea

May 19, 2025

22

谢谢你!

当老师好吗?


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小明:你觉得当老师好吗?


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小红:很好, 老师可以很跟孩子玩。


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小红:很好, 老师可以跟孩子玩。


小红:很好, 老师可以很跟孩子玩。

原本的也正确,修正后更自然。

小明:我觉得当老师不太好。


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小红:为什么?


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小明:因为当老师要讲课, 还要改作业, 很累, 我觉得当老师不太好。


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小明:因为当老师要讲课, 还要改作业, 很累, 所以我觉得当老师不太好。

原本的也正确,修正后更自然。

小红:话是这么说, 我还是😍喜欢当老师。


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小红:话是这么说, 我还是😍喜欢当老师。

原本的也正确,修正后更自然。

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