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小复述 (最强男神小说第一章一部分)

新学年快到了。c大学今天安排学生会的副会长江雪来火车站迎新人。她是历史系四年级,长发长腿的大美人,性格特别认真又热心。
她刚刚安顿好了几个师弟师妹,抬起头就看见一个身材高男生。那男生穿了简单的牛仔裤和黑色T恤。因为身材高,在人群里显得十分醒目。
他过来问江雪:“请问,学校的校车什么时候来?”
她说:“很快就到了,师弟你哪个学院的?”
男生回答:“历史系的。”
果然校车很快就到了,江雪让大一新生们依次上车,自己最后一个坐到车上。她发现刚才那个男生旁边的位置正好空着,便走过去在他的旁边坐了下来。
侧头一看,男生正低着头拿起手机玩游戏。他的表情很专注,手里在玩的游戏是“节奏大师”。

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小复述 (最强男神小说第一章一部分)

新学年快到了。

c大学今天安排学生会的副会长江雪来火车站迎(接)新人。

她是历史系四年级学生,长发长腿的大美人,性格特别认真又热心。

她刚刚安顿好了几个师弟师妹,抬起头就看见一个身材很高的男生。

那男生穿了简单的牛仔裤和黑色T恤。

因为身材高,在人群里显得十分醒目。

他过来问江雪:“请问,学校的校车什么时候来?”

她说:“很快就到了,师弟你哪个学院的?”

男生回答:“历史系的。”

果然校车很快就到了,江雪让大一新生们依次上车,自己最后一个坐到车上。

她发现刚才那个男生旁边的位置正好空着,便走过去在他的旁边坐了下来。

侧头一看,男生正低着头拿起手机玩游戏。

他的表情很专注,手里在玩的游戏是“节奏大师”。

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Your Chinese is so good. Keep it up.

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Jack

July 21, 2021

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You can change your level to b1 or b2.

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wuxia15

July 21, 2021

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Thank you very much.

小复述 (最强男神小说第一章一部分)

新学年快到了。

c大学今天安排学生会的副会长江雪来火车站迎新人。

她是历史系四年级,长发长腿的大美人,性格特别认真又热心。

她刚刚安顿好了几个师弟师妹,抬起头就看见一个身材高大的男生。

那男生穿了简单的牛仔裤和黑色T恤。

因为身材高,在人群里显得十分醒目。

他过来问江雪:“请问,学校的校车什么时候来?”

她说:“很快就到了,师弟你哪个学院的?”

男生回答:“历史系的。”

果然校车很快就到了,江雪让大一新生们依次上车,自己最后一个坐到车上。

她发现刚才那个男生旁边的位置正好空着,便走过去在他的旁边坐了下来。

侧头一看,男生正低着头拿起手机玩游戏。

他的表情很专注,手里在玩的游戏是“节奏大师”。

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Perfect!

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wuxia15

July 20, 2021

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谢谢!

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Jack

July 21, 2021

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You can change your level to b1 or b2.

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wuxia15

July 21, 2021

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My level isn't really that good. It's just that I was retelling Chinese webnovel and I repeated some sentences almost exactly as they were written.

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新学年快到了。


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c大学今天安排学生会的副会长江雪来火车站迎新人。


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c大学今天安排学生会的副会长江雪来火车站迎(接)新人。

她是历史系四年级,长发长腿的大美人,性格特别认真又热心。


她是历史系四年级,长发长腿的大美人,性格特别认真又热心。

她是历史系四年级学生,长发长腿的大美人,性格特别认真又热心。

她刚刚安顿好了几个师弟师妹,抬起头就看见一个身材高男生。


她刚刚安顿好了几个师弟师妹,抬起头就看见一个身材高大的男生。

她刚刚安顿好了几个师弟师妹,抬起头就看见一个身材很高的男生。

那男生穿了简单的牛仔裤和黑色T恤。


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因为身材高,在人群里显得十分醒目。


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他过来问江雪:“请问,学校的校车什么时候来?”


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她说:“很快就到了,师弟你哪个学院的?”


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男生回答:“历史系的。”


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果然校车很快就到了,江雪让大一新生们依次上车,自己最后一个坐到车上。


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她发现刚才那个男生旁边的位置正好空着,便走过去在他的旁边坐了下来。


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侧头一看,男生正低着头拿起手机玩游戏。


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他的表情很专注,手里在玩的游戏是“节奏大师”。


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