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Toluwani

Nov. 19, 2024

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太阳和电

这个年的太阳好热。好像是每年太阳更热。今天早上九点多太阳已经出来。这个太阳可以晒人的皮肤。我不喜欢很热的太阳,因为我走在太阳下的时候会让我觉得很累。
在周一和周二,电公司记得我们,给我们两天的电,这可是难得啊。从我第一次住在这儿,这是我第一次见过这件事了。


The sun is so hot this year. It seems like the sun is getting hotter every year. Today, the sun was out at around 9am. This sun can burn people's skin. I don't like the hot sun because it makes me feel tired when I walk under it.
On Monday and Tuesday, the electricity company remembered us and gave us two days of electricity, which is rare. This is the first time I have seen this since I first lived here.

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这个年的太阳好热。

this year=今年,跟today=今天一样

好像是似乎每年太阳更热都越来越热了

The sun is so hot this year. It seems like the sun is getting hotter every year. Today, the sun was out at around 9am. This sun can burn people's skin. I don't like the hot sun because it makes me feel tired when I walk under it.
On Monday and Tuesday, the electricity company remembered us and gave us two days of electricity, which is rare. This is the first time I have seen this since I first lived here.

今天早上九点多太阳已经出来

这个太阳可以晒人的皮肤。

我不喜欢很热的太阳,因为走在太阳下的时候会让我觉得很累。


周一和周二,电公司记挂着我们,给我们两天的电,这可是难得啊。

从我第一次住在这儿,这是我第一次见过这件到这种事了。

这件事=this specific thing,这种事=this type of thing。联系上下文,这个句子用“这种事”比较好。

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Toluwani

Nov. 27, 2024

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谢谢您❤️🌹

太阳和电


这个年的太阳好热。


这个年的太阳好热。

this year=今年,跟today=今天一样

好像是每年太阳更热。


好像是似乎每年太阳更热都越来越热了

The sun is so hot this year. It seems like the sun is getting hotter every year. Today, the sun was out at around 9am. This sun can burn people's skin. I don't like the hot sun because it makes me feel tired when I walk under it. On Monday and Tuesday, the electricity company remembered us and gave us two days of electricity, which is rare. This is the first time I have seen this since I first lived here.

今天早上九点多太阳已经出来。


今天早上九点多太阳已经出来

这个太阳可以晒人的皮肤。


这个太阳可以晒人的皮肤。

我不喜欢很热的太阳,因为我走在太阳下的时候会让我觉得很累。


我不喜欢很热的太阳,因为走在太阳下的时候会让我觉得很累。

在周一和周二,电公司记得我们,给我们两天的电,这可是难得啊。



周一和周二,电公司记挂着我们,给我们两天的电,这可是难得啊。

从我第一次住在这儿,这是我第一次见过这件事了。


从我第一次住在这儿,这是我第一次见过这件到这种事了。

这件事=this specific thing,这种事=this type of thing。联系上下文,这个句子用“这种事”比较好。

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