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天气怎么样?

今天天气比昨天好,不下雪了。 我约了朋友明天去公园滑冰,不知道天气会怎么 样?

我刚才看了网上的天气预报,明天天气比今天更 好。不但不会下雪,而且会暖和一点儿。

是吗?太好了!

你约了谁去滑冰?

白英爱。

你约了白英爱?可是她今天早飞机去纽约了。

真的啊?那我明天怎么办?

你还是在家看碟吧!

天气
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天气怎么样?

今天天气比昨天好,不下雪了。

我约了朋友明天去公园滑冰,不知道天气会怎么 样?

我刚才看了网上的天气预报,明天天气比今天更 好。

不但不会下雪,而且会暖和一点儿。

是吗?

太好了!

你约了谁去滑冰?

白英爱。

你约了白英爱?

可是她今天早飞机去纽约了。

it is understandable but it would be better if you write '早上'。

你还是在家看碟吧!

totally understandable and grammatically correct. but it may hint at something horny. '看碟' feels like you will watch pornhub.

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bea

yesterday

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哈哈😄No harm intended! 谢谢你!

天气怎么样?

今天天气比昨天好,不下雪了。

我约了朋友明天去公园滑冰,不知道天气会怎么 样?

我刚才看了网上的天气预报,明天天气比今天更 好。

不但不会下雪,而且会暖和一点儿。

太好了!

你约了谁去滑冰?

白英爱。

你约了白英爱?

可是她今天早飞机去纽约了。

真的啊?

那我明天怎么办?

你还是在家看碟吧!

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bea

yesterday

235

谢谢你!

天气怎么样?


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今天天气比昨天好,不下雪了。


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我约了朋友明天去公园滑冰,不知道天气会怎么 样?


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我刚才看了网上的天气预报,明天天气比今天更 好。


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不但不会下雪,而且会暖和一点儿。


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是吗?


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太好了!


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你约了谁去滑冰?


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白英爱。


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你约了白英爱?


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可是她今天早飞机去纽约了。


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可是她今天早飞机去纽约了。

it is understandable but it would be better if you write '早上'。

真的啊?


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那我明天怎么办?


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你还是在家看碟吧!


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你还是在家看碟吧!

totally understandable and grammatically correct. but it may hint at something horny. '看碟' feels like you will watch pornhub.

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