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dragonzy

Nov. 2, 2021

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在黑暗中遇见我。

在黑暗中遇见我。

找我。 我在森林里。

我不远。

找到圣树。

不要 害怕。

没有人在看。

我发誓没有人在看我们。

过来。

跟随光。

跟着火。

我有话跟你说。

你不是一个人。

我要你。

我爱你。

不要害怕

没有人在看。

怎么还在害怕。


Meet me in the dark.

Find me. I am in the forest.

I am not far.

Find the hallow tree.

Don't be afraid.

No one is watching.

I swear no one is watching us.

Come here.

Follow the light.

Follow the fire.

I have something to tell you.

You're not alone.

I want you.

I love you.

Don't be afraid.

No one's watching.

Why are you still afraid.

Corrections

在黑暗中见我。

It's more like: come to meet me,something like an order right?
遇见 sounds like you ran into the person by accident

在黑暗中见我。

找我。

我在森林里。

不远。

我不远。is also correct

不要 害怕。

没有人在看。

我发誓没有人在看我们。

过来。

跟随光。

跟着火。

你不是一个人。

我要你。

我爱你。

不要害怕

没有人在看。

怎么还在害怕。

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dragonzy

Nov. 3, 2021

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谢谢!For correcting. Most on other site are hesitant.

Kind of a song I am working on for melody in my head. ;)

It would be cool if I could sing in Chinese. A great way to remember. Since the character has some Chinese origins in their heritage.

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dragonzy

Sept. 8, 2022

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在黑暗中见我。

在黑暗中见我。= Meet me in the dark

在黑暗中遇见我。


在黑暗中见我。

It's more like: come to meet me,something like an order right? 遇见 sounds like you ran into the person by accident

在黑暗中遇见我。


在黑暗中见我。

找我。


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我在森林里。


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我不远。


不远。

我不远。is also correct

找到圣树。


不要 害怕。


不要 害怕。

没有人在看。


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我发誓没有人在看我们。


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过来。


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跟随光。


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跟着火。


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我有话跟你说。


你不是一个人。


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我要你。


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我爱你。


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不要害怕


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没有人在看。


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怎么还在害怕。


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