Dec. 18, 2024
回家的路上
昨天我说我们没有实验，可以回家。所以今天我回家。我到路边等车，进了第一车，我们还没去远，车胎瘪了。汽车应该有另一车胎在行李箱，但是这个车没有。我只能进另一车了。一会儿我又进另一车才能回家。
Yesterday I said we didn't have any practical, we can go home. So today I went home. I went to the roadside to wait for a vehicle, got into the first car, we haven't gone far when the tire of the car got flat. A car should have another tire in the trunk, but this car didn't have extra tyre. I had to get into another car. After a while, I got into another car again before I got home.
回家的路上
昨天我说我们没有实验，可以回家了。
所以今天我回家啦。
我到路边等车，。进了第一辆车，我们还没去出去多远，车胎瘪了。
在中文里，一旦有数字+物体，一定要想到物体对应的量词【这里我想给你标上警报用的红色😄】：一辆车、一本书、一个轮胎......
汽车应该有另一个备用车胎在行李箱的，但是这个辆车没有。
Yesterday I said we didn't have any practical, we can go home. So today I went home. I went to the roadside to wait for a vehicle, got into the first car, we haven't gone far when the tire of the car got flat. A car should have another tire in the trunk, but this car didn't have extra tyre. I had to get into another car. After a while, I got into another car again before I got home.
我只能进乘另一辆车了。
过了一会儿，我又进坐到另一车才能回了家。
Feedback
1）量词的问题，建议集中训练一下。作为中文母语者，我们在小学的时候也会有专门的语文单元来规范量词的学习的。
我找了60个物体对应的量词清单给你参考https://www.51test.net/show/10038982.html
别担心里边不认识的字，挑你认识的先记，然后慢慢累积就好了。
2）作为一个乘客，交通工具的动词有“坐”“乘”“搭”等等，比如：我今天坐公交车/乘地铁/搭小巴车回家。
3）你的中文已经能够大致表达清楚意思了，感觉你到了一个需要模块化中文学习的级别。所以我写了这些，不是因为你今天写得不好，而是给你提供一个模块化的思路哈。
我到路边等车，进了第一辆车，我们还没去走远，车胎瘪了。
汽车行李箱里应该有另一个车胎在行李箱，但是这个车没有。
我只能进另一辆车了。
一会儿我又进另一辆车才能回家。
Dec. 19, 2024
谢谢您
回家的路上
昨天我说我们没有实验，可以回家。
所以今天我回家。
我到路边等车，进了第一辆车，我们还没去走远，车胎瘪了。
汽车应该有另一车胎在行李箱有备胎，但是这个辆车没有。
我只能进另一好换一辆车了。
过了一会儿，我又进另一车才能回打到了一辆车才回到家。
I assumed you meant taxis. 打车 is to summon taxis or Ubers and the like.
Dec. 19, 2024
谢谢您。
I guess they can be called taxis.
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