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judar

May 3, 2025

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今天天气死热了!我和妹妹去逛逛街,买了几件衣服。我本来想买遮阳帽,但店里没有。晚饭吃了披萨,特别好吃。


The weather was so hot today! My sister and I took a walk and bought some clothes. I thought about buying a sun visor, but it wasn't in the store. Dinner was pizza, it was delicious.

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今天天气了!

今天天气死热!——你也可以这么讲,这是我家乡方言的说法,不带“了”。

我和妹妹去逛逛街,买了几件衣服。

我本来想买遮阳帽,但店里没有。

晚饭吃了披萨,特别好吃。

今天天气死热了!

我和妹妹去逛逛街,买了几件衣服。

我本来想买遮阳帽,但店里没有。

晚饭吃了披萨,特别好吃。

今天天气死热了!

我和妹妹去逛街,买了几件衣服。

我本来想买遮阳帽,但店里没有。

晚饭吃了披萨,特别好吃。

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我也喜欢吃披萨!说起来我有半年没有吃披萨了。

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judar

May 4, 2025

245

半年!!我天啊 😭

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250093811

May 4, 2025

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最近的天气,吃火锅呀Chafing dish!!!!!烧烤呀Barbeque!!!!

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judar

May 4, 2025

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我还没尝过火锅 🤔

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250093811

May 5, 2025

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听说火锅在外国的价格比较贵,当你来中国时一定要尝试一下!
火锅在中国也有很多种哦~

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judar

May 5, 2025

245

Definitely ! :))


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今天天气了!

今天天气死热!——你也可以这么讲,这是我家乡方言的说法,不带“了”。

我和妹妹去逛逛街,买了几件衣服。


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我本来想买遮阳帽,但店里没有。


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晚饭吃了披萨,特别好吃。


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