June 21, 2020
啥个是上我个台子
（吴语）上台子是我为了工作用个电脑。有多书因为我经常勿整理台子。也有一个我热时用个扇子，以为是黑暗时灯。
(Wu) On my table is a computer that I use for work. There are many books because I don’t often tidy my desk.There’s also a fan that I use when I’m hot, and a lamp for when it’s dark.
啥个是上我个台子什么在我的台子上？
（吴语）上在台子上是我为了工作用个的工作电脑。
The order of “上” in the sentence needs to be moved. Also, "工作电脑“ is a bit more compact way to say "为了工作的电脑“
有台子上有很多书因为我不经常勿整理台子。
台子也有一个我热时用个得时候用的扇子，我以为他是黑暗时灯。
June 24, 2020
So 上 comes after the phrase it modifies? 谢谢侬！
June 25, 2020
I'm not familiar with the Wu dialect, but in the varieties of Chinese that I have exposure to, prepositions follow the phrases that they modify. For example, the Chinese translation of "Moscow Nights" begins with "深夜花园里" (roughly, "[in] the deep night, in the garden," though someone else could probably give a better gloss).
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啥个是上我个台子
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（吴语）上台子是我为了工作用个电脑。 （吴语） The order of “上” in the sentence needs to be moved. Also, "工作电脑“ is a bit more compact way to say "为了工作的电脑“ |
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有多书因为我经常勿整理台子。
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也有一个我热时用个扇子，以为是黑暗时灯。 台子也有一个我热 |
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